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flaming breasts (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

I feel the waking of the beast inside my head My soul filled of loathing And my lungs filled of fire Talk to me and I'll set your world spinning I am what was corrupted at youth For the spirits there is no cnosolation Every step I take curses the ground beneath me The logic of a passed life losens grip I see the world in a new light All that is unmolested is mine for the taking I will be the determining factor for greed The downfall of innocence started with one It shall continue with many

smlink84 8-Jul-03/8:40 PM
All three of you are the same person. How do I know this you ask? You see, God has ordained this information to my knowledge. Don't belive, "Kathryn H."
Your poem is very "poetic"




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