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looking for him (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
Joe I sat awake in the dark Calling your name Waiting for you to stop hiding Tell me you're still here Tell me you never left And We're still together Tell me that I can hug you again Come out Joe I love you so much All this pain is just tearing me apart I can't stand it I know that some one Will tell me that you are dead At your service some one Will tell me you'll never walk through the door You'll never tell me that you're still here Joe I miss you so stop hiding Tell me you're still ok Come let me find you Joe So I can stop the crying So I can stop jmv

Up the ladder: flaming breasts
Down the ladder: hip hap pap

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11304
Posted: July 21, 2003 11:25 AM PDT; Last modified: November 19, 2003 7:38 PM PST
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Comments:
[0] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-Jul-03/11:56 AM | Reply
Perhaps you should rent a cherry picker and join him?
[4] savagelymakeitcount @ 220.99.224.11 | 20-Nov-03/4:36 AM | Reply
quantity..10 quality...4
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