poemranker ::looking for him by Freethinker1602

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Free verse № 56951

looking for him

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Jul 2003 · Edited 19 Nov 2003 · 2 comments

Joe I sat awake in the dark Calling your name Waiting for you to stop hiding Tell me you're still here Tell me you never left And We're still together Tell me that I can hug you again Come out Joe I love you so much All this pain is just tearing me apart I can't stand it I know that some one Will tell me that you are dead At your service some one Will tell me you'll never walk through the door You'll never tell me that you're still here Joe I miss you so stop hiding Tell me you're still ok Come let me find you Joe So I can stop the crying So I can stop jmv

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2 comments

[0] horus8 21-Jul-03/11:56 AM Reply
Perhaps you should rent a cherry picker and join him?
[4] savagelymakeitcount 20-Nov-03/4:36 AM Reply
quantity..10 quality...4