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looking for him (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
Joe I sat awake in the dark
Calling your name
Waiting for you to stop hiding
Tell me you're still here
Tell me you never left
And We're still together
Tell me that I can hug you again
Come out Joe I love you so much
All this pain is just tearing me apart
I can't stand it I know that some one
Will tell me that you are dead
At your service some one
Will tell me you'll never walk through the door
You'll never tell me that you're still here
Joe I miss you so stop hiding
Tell me you're still ok
Come let me find you Joe
So I can stop the crying
So I can stop
jmv
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11309
Posted: July 21, 2003 11:25 AM PDT; Last modified: November 19, 2003 7:38 PM PST
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