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20 most recent comments by Bachus (401-420)

Re: No Tomorrow by mikehi 17-Jun-03/5:19 PM
You should be more concerned about today.
Re: Me, Myself and I by gracefulangelofsin 17-Jun-03/6:18 PM
Yes, I agree. The line breaks are randomly skeptical. Good call!
Re: No Tomorrow by mikehi 17-Jun-03/6:20 PM
Because the magical Elves of Yor are still building tomorrow.
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Jun-03/7:03 PM
NO! NOT I! I FOCUSED MY ANGER, for the betterment of teefuses and gummies abroead. I've upheld the sacred undisclosed doctrines of raping shine, and much more. watch *poof*
My floss by Twiggy the second (Lyric) by horus8



Sometimes I just can’t ever try to live without
All the suffering, all the gingivitis
Sometimes my body goes, but the mind won’t allow
Trying to avoid all the plaque in the world


(Bridge & Crown work pre-root-canal)

My fears, my faults, my tears, my floss
My tries, my trust, my lies, my loss
My loss of floss
(horus on sitar)
No wants, no teeth
Just a mind to set and a rage to feed
No wants, no gums
Just a soul to find and a squishy plum


Sometimes I try to change the wanted dentistry
Under my own gas mask
Sometimes it’s better to find a way to take a tank
and hide within a flask

(horus on steel drums)

So swallow, marshmallow, oil of carro
Losing the trust in my floss
So receded, depleted, mistreated
I am your sore bloody gums

(Chorus/Ending/brush your fucking teeth)

I'm a hero.
Re: Your Wish by hotwire 17-Jun-03/7:24 PM
Rent "I spit on your grave and let the popcorn pop," Bily.
Re: Me, Myself and I by gracefulangelofsin 17-Jun-03/7:40 PM
I predict you picked your user name in a moment of post traumatic stress and a vengeful ferver, and you will regret it sooner then later. I mean for the love of Christ? Are you just fucking high?
regarding some deleted poem... 18-Jun-03/2:22 PM
A senseless plug

http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=51209

Look at your brother at the bottom, smile.
regarding some deleted poem... 18-Jun-03/2:24 PM
A Shit sandwich on pump-her-knickle.
regarding some deleted poem... 18-Jun-03/3:08 PM
Hey sis, you're earing (a pearl stud) was found in the dryer.
regarding some deleted poem... 18-Jun-03/4:43 PM
That would true... If he had friends.
regarding some deleted poem... 18-Jun-03/4:44 PM
Ah, lovely.
Re: Irony by poetofthestar 18-Jun-03/4:50 PM
"My Friends
Margaret- Hey gurl! Fun fun fun!!! Thank you for Prom. You know what I mean. YAY!!!! lol sorry... hyper. lol. ok love ya! your forever my sister... whether you like it or not!! lol.
Cody- Hey, we need to talk soon. you are an awesome guy. possiably the sweetest and most awesome dude I know. I love talking to you and you give the best advice of anyone I kno. if you ever need any help with anything just ask. lylab forever.
Sean- I never get to talk to you anymore. I miss you :-( Love you!
Nicole- Girlie!!! He's So not worht it. lol. We are over him totaly and completley. Jerk off. Oh, well. lol. love ya like a sis.
William- You were amazing in the play. I loved it. It was hillarious. Love ya like a bro.
Billy- Hey babe! I can't wait! Meg said I can go!!! :-D
Ashley- I swear ive put you up here before! Geocities must hate you or something. lol sorry but your up now. unless the page doesnt save. then your not. lol. did you find the evil pencil? lol. lylas!
Casey- You are amazing. Keep writing hun. Never stop writing.
AJ- ... yah. ok. lol. debating wit you is a lot of fun. your a great person. your too tall!!! lol. o and i can finaly do that thing from small group! lol. i can use both legs now! yay.
Greg- Hey hunny, you are great. Great job in the play. lylab." I don't blame you.
Re: Pistolero by Wulf 18-Jun-03/5:49 PM
Hmmmm. A powerful piece. Could use a comma more in a couple of spots, but since i'm a leo, I'll over look it, and give you a well earned 10!
regarding some deleted poem... 18-Jun-03/6:13 PM
Shook foil was interesting. The last verse has promise. your beginning sucks.
Re: The irony of the dark continent by zzinnia66 19-Jun-03/1:25 PM
Sorry to hear that.
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Jun-03/1:26 PM
Lovely
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Jun-03/1:29 PM
Delightful, sounds like a BBQ worth stopping by.
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Jun-03/1:31 PM
Intaglio & remorsefull.
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Jun-03/2:07 PM
Shoe lace humpers, the lot of them.
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Jun-03/2:11 PM
That car is too funny, come on, right? you laughed I know you did, shit, I still am. everytime I look at it, I just crack up.


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