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Your Wish (Lyric) by hotwire
By Bily Foster When I met you I thought you were cute That's because I saw all of you When you met me you assumed to much and thought of me as one not to trust Don't you wish you understood me back then Instead of wondering in the end Everything I did I did for a friend and if I had to I'd do it again But see all me before you judge Even if I get angry and hold a grudge Don't you wish you understood me back then Instead of wondering in the end Everything I did I did for a friend and if I had to I'd do it again I may not call or write as often but time will heal as my wounds soften Hurt and pain I've had all my life Don't think I don't cope or do things right I'm not bragging about what I've been through I've just had experience trying to keeping my cool Don't you wish you understood me back then Instead of wondering in the end Everything I did I did for a friend and if I had to I'd do it again I try real hard not to scream and yell When you did that to me my heart fell The hurtful things that were said Like I hope you get sick and wind up dead Well you got your wish at least half Don't you wish now you could take that back Sticks and stones will break my bones But your words of love and trust have left me alone Don't you wish you could take that back Those hurtful words are called verbal attacks I know you didn't mean what you said back then Which is why for the rest of my life you will still be my friend Don't you wish you understood me back then Instead of wondering in the end Everything I did I did for a friend and if I had to I'd do it again The pressure of success and life it can be demanding which how I've learned to be understanding I hope these words they don't sound too rough but then again they are just words so you to be tough Don't you wish you understood me back then Instead of wondering in the end

Down the ladder: Some bad things

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7036
Posted: June 17, 2003 8:08 AM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2003 8:08 AM PDT
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[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Jun-03/7:24 PM | Reply
Rent "I spit on your grave and let the popcorn pop," Bily.
[9] The_Third_Isis @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Sep-03/11:00 PM | Reply
why wonder you are gifted.
The Third Isis
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