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Pistolero (Free verse) by Wulf
He stares down the barrel of his gun
into the eyes of his singing son
knows they are only what they are
lions lost in a sea of stars
Will they remember, fathom when
what was real and might have been
a man's weapon just equal to
a lifetime made and time undo
Clearing leather, a whisper sound
as death's intent and target found
Children they are liquid See
poured into a mold to be
as lead and flight explosion sent
youth intention contretemps
The old man wears his weapon well
its voice his life and come to tell
A step aside, the mark and aim
chaos, direction, all the same
This time he rests his hammer down
the choice to be his only found
The young lion stands confused
this brightest star and yet unused
reads the death on his father's face
clearing leather whisper embrace
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5629
Posted: June 18, 2003 5:10 PM PDT; Last modified: June 18, 2003 5:10 PM PDT
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story told, with rythm. made sense. yes.