poemranker ::Belongings by Christof

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Free verse № 10078

Belongings

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Aug 2002 · 11 comments

And how, whenever she took your hand She held it tight enough to pinch She kept it in her pocket like a coin She stroked the knuckles until they purred She owned it And how, whenever she spoke your name She pursed it in her mouth like schnapps She crooked it in her throat like cream She wrung the vowels until they rained She drank it Is what you'll remember When you ring up her Mum And ask What the fuck has she done with my clothes?

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A favorite of god'swife.

11 comments

[8] razorgrin 20-Aug-02/7:05 AM Reply
That's nice. I like it and I like schnapps.
[9] <~> 20-Aug-02/7:49 AM Reply
'wrung the vowels until they rained', indeed. this is swell.
[10] god'swife 21-Aug-02/3:21 AM Reply
see, I knew it! She owned it, she drank it, that's some sexy sh*t. You can write, so don't take it personally if I think one of your poems isn't of this higher quality. By the way you can look up my drivel and shred it to pieces, as long as you're being honest. I'd appreciate that.
[9] OneFingerAnswer 23-Sep-02/9:10 PM Reply
Another hit.
[9] daniella 19-Oct-02/10:27 PM Reply
breaking up is hard to do, so get your stuff b4 you end it through and through.
[n/a] Christof › daniella 21-Oct-02/1:27 AM Reply
Too damn right. I won't be making that mistake again.
[9] daniella › Christof 21-Oct-02/9:02 PM Reply
purring knuckles. sweet. how do things get so friggin sour?
live and learn.
[10] god'swife 21-Oct-02/10:55 PM Reply
This popped up on random, I 'd forgotten it. I forget things. If you tell me a joke, in 3 months time you can tell it to me again. I love how you manage to conceal the punch til the last moment.
[10] horus8 16-Jun-03/2:50 PM Reply
Good god have a Platinum Q-tip awarde, that was simply the best.
[10] Shardik 16-Jun-03/3:50 PM Reply
I keep going back and just cackling like a hyenna! I will take this up the charts myself than.
[10] Bachus 23-Jun-03/12:00 AM Reply
Absolutely poetry at it's best