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click (Free verse) by crin
echoing against my skull
for the first and last time
a blast from the past
to the future
a suture
for this gaping wound
the end has come too soon
clicking against my teeth
the pressure released
and my head caving in so sweetly
the big bang theory
deconstructed
reworked
and fucked up
diluting reality
lifting the curse
verse chorus verse
a burst of light
to seal my fate
now the flies will congregate
and give me wings
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.9375
Weighted score: 5.8257475
Overall Rank: 1636
Posted: April 20, 2002 12:50 PM PDT; Last modified: April 20, 2002 12:50 PM PDT
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