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click (Free verse) by crin
echoing against my skull for the first and last time a blast from the past to the future a suture for this gaping wound the end has come too soon clicking against my teeth the pressure released and my head caving in so sweetly the big bang theory deconstructed reworked and fucked up diluting reality lifting the curse verse chorus verse a burst of light to seal my fate now the flies will congregate and give me wings

Up the ladder: The Waiting Room
Down the ladder: Belongings

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.9375
Weighted score: 5.8257475
Overall Rank: 1636
Posted: April 20, 2002 12:50 PM PDT; Last modified: April 20, 2002 12:50 PM PDT
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[7] nentwined @ | 23-Apr-02/3:30 AM | Reply
interesting... a little disjoint for my taste.
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