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I Wonder (Other) by EmicaX Sometimes I wonder,
If it will ever end.
I can't stand 2 look at you,
Though we said we'd be friends.
I know that if I look,
Into your bright blue eyes;
I will be put in a trance,
And be hypnotized.
Though we had our differences,
And our similarities.
Now I know I made a mistake,
You were meant for me.
I know I shouldn't have let you go,
Because you truly cared.
You didn't come into my heart,
To say you had been there.
I can't take it any more,
Though I know that I'll get by.
I guess that I just wanted to say,
I love you, and Good-Bye.
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Posted: June 30, 2003 4:07 PM PDT; Last modified: June 30, 2003 4:07 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7558 Comments:
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223
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30-Jun-03/5:41 PM
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A good first poem for the Ranker C. but be fair warned that if they are all like this You are gonna get Flamed big time. Later Daze C. Later Daze. -8-
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223
> thepinkbunnyofdoom
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1-Jul-03/9:44 AM
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Sorry this clutter on your poem C. Being friends with me is like wearing a Target T-shirt, apparently.
THIS IS A HUGE PILE OF STEAMING SHIT. NEXT!
You think you could be a little harder on a newb? If your going to be as harsh as D.A. then sign in as him for the love of Jesu!
FUCK OFF YOU CUNT
HA HA
Ah... How sweet darlin' you used more potty language, your such a naughty little boy but its okay sugar. Jesu still loves you.
Your just a slack-assed -=Dark_Angel=- wannabe.
Shit, a while back you though "Jesu" was a misspelling. Make up your own jokes, you dumb-ass copy-cat motherfucker.
Oh HOW right YOU are. D.A. was the first person ever to use Jesu and the first person ever to say "Jesu loves you mockingly". EH! Wrong. Look in Canterbury Tales by Geoff Chaucer. In the description of the Pardoner is one exsample. Jesu isn't new. Now lets see how old is Chaucer? Well seeing as to how he died before Shakespeare was even concieved I'd say older than D.A.
Now then your absolutly right, I did think it was a miss spelling but D.A., Horus8, and Razorgrin, have given me quite an education since I first arrived. I've said time and time again that I like D.A.'s writings, but I loathe Him. D.A. is not someone I WANNA BE. A sarcastic remark as general as that warrenting all this. Hmm... Go figure.
Of course it's not new you Idiots... It's fucking Italian, good God every fucking moron knows that. watching the two of you try to come off as being intelligent is comparable to watching Spinach grow on the moon.
"Any fool can criticize, condemn, and complain - and most fools do."
-Dale Carnegie
Quotation is an inadequate substitute for independent thought
Anyway, Dale Carnegie was a fool-ass bitch who didn't know shit but how to bitch-slap a trick like a pimpin' mack daddy
You just proved his point for quoting him.
"People with dimples are inferior due to recessive genes, and should be turned into garden hoses" Adolph Hitler.
Well they work for Slim Shady.
true enough. its a good thing I've only got one. otherwise when the sleeping fury wakes up you'd be sucking golf balls thru me.
keep on truckin
Take a fucking picture.
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