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I Wonder (Other) by EmicaX

Sometimes I wonder, If it will ever end. I can't stand 2 look at you, Though we said we'd be friends. I know that if I look, Into your bright blue eyes; I will be put in a trance, And be hypnotized. Though we had our differences, And our similarities. Now I know I made a mistake, You were meant for me. I know I shouldn't have let you go, Because you truly cared. You didn't come into my heart, To say you had been there. I can't take it any more, Though I know that I'll get by. I guess that I just wanted to say, I love you, and Good-Bye.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 30-Jun-03/5:41 PM
A good first poem for the Ranker C. but be fair warned that if they are all like this You are gonna get Flamed big time. Later Daze C. Later Daze. -8-




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