Re: a comment on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser	18-Mar-05/7:17 AM
well let me just say this, Hallelujah. It a relief to see that atleast one other person can pull my meaning out of my poem. Thank you dovina for that. I am sorry if my wording seems to *muddle* the message im bringing across. ~Autumn
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	16-Mar-05/12:18 PM
WOW! I'm lacking anything to say, other then this poem is brilliant. So touching, so deep. utterly amazing, I disagree with the comments of it being to lengthly. Perfection is all i can think of. ****10**** ~Autumn
Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess	15-Mar-05/1:36 PM
Pardon me Ed, Perhaps you should back off and stop with your assumptions first of all. Second of all I gave you a few facts as to why my spelling and grammer is so far off, admitted, apologized and mearly shed some light on the subject. Third off, yes i am young in some's eyes. Is this a bad thing??? Last but not least could we get of this poor womans comment page, I'm sure no one wants to hear what you or myself has to say to eachother. If you wish to throw more judgments or insults my way could you at least have the courtisy to do so on one of my own poem comment pages? Sorry to all those who have had to read all this crap. Most of all sorry to poetess. I never should have let it go this far. ~Autumn
Re: a comment on Subtle Reasons by crooked_smile	15-Mar-05/6:32 AM
I believe god is very compassionate, the suffering well we create that ourselves. Rest assured he knows of the suffering, and will walk beside you on the journey to healing and growth, but will not take the steps for you. Free will was given to each and every one of us, he lovingly stands back and lets us fall while holding his breath, like a parent watching a child learn to walk. In order to learn how to walk you must also learn how to fall, and eventualy that child will know how to catch herself before she falls. Although it can be a rough lesson, in the end that child learned alot of valuble lessons. Think not of God turning a blind eye to his children, realize that we all must learn to walk our path on our own. For if someone does everything for you in life and gives you all the answers, what have you really learned?. The devil well once again i do not believe in the devil, I do believe there are many evil things in this world, Like selfishness, heartless-ness, greed, ego, and money lol. thos are your devil. ~Autumn
Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess	15-Mar-05/6:07 AM
I am sorry, yes i know my English is horrid. Rest assured i do plan to go back to school, Once my children are alittle older, Until then i work with what i have. Forgive my mistakes. ~Autumn
Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess	15-Mar-05/6:00 AM
I am not incompetent thank you very much!. Yes my English is by far not up to par, for that i have , and do apologize. My grammer is even worse, AS for a teacher... ummm ive been out of school for 12 years, i do plan to go back once my babies are alittle older. But i assure you i am not incompetent, just lacking alot of schooling.. and before you go jumping the gun saying im a drop out, i was signed out of grade 9 when i was kicked out of my house!. It really shocks me that some of you people can be so quick to judge, so quick to assume you are all knowing. It is truly pathetic! as for my nic rainbow chaser, it speeks of an animal who can stalk, waiting for the right moment to grasp what it is he wants.. The animal reeks of introspection... So mr hot shot, can you figure out what animal i speek of? ~Autumn
Re: Subtle Reasons by crooked_smile	10-Mar-05/11:24 AM
great poem, perhaps i dont agree with the no straight answer part, but thats just diffence in opinion or belief. but over all im lovin this poem! 9 ~Autumn
Re: a comment on A Nation by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/3:41 PM
I'm a Canadian. And of course i dont mind saying. Its not that i have anything against america per-say, perhaps its just the goverment i have a serious issue with. I dont find it strange to love yet hate your country, i honestly do love my own, but then we have it much easier over here. ~Autumn
Re: Today, last year was on a Sunday by thepinkbunnyofdoom	9-Mar-05/11:46 AM
not bad, but i really enjoyed the last sentance. it really brought it togeather and gave it more meaning over all.
Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/11:39 AM
ahhh on the contrary, to respond does not mean to accept. to accept this comment i would have to agree or approve of what you stated above. I do not accept it, therefore i refuse it. perhaps i mearly replied for the stimulation of confrontation.... never assume you know all the answers. ;) ~Autumn
Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/11:06 AM
you are a close minded judgemental person from what i see. So quick to assume your high up on the ladder... well i begg to differ and i refuse to accept your last comment. I am not incompetant, i lack much schooling yes, but to jump to incompetant, sheesh. so i will repeat what i stated in my last comment, sad, so very sad. ~Autumn
Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/8:37 AM
ahh you incorrectly imply that i live in the box ;). never my friend NEVER! As for the robots, like hell! free will must be honored for thos whom choose to find comfort in the box, sad but true. And have you really acomplished anything in live if you have never put forth the effort?
Re: How to make a suicide bomber by Caducus	9-Mar-05/8:34 AM
ahh the world is over runn with heartlessness, a poem that holds a fraction of events that occur daily, and then others sit by and judge without understanding. so sad. ~Autumn
Re: Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL	9-Mar-05/8:20 AM
well im not sure what to say here, its a well writen poem, hats off to that. can say im supper big on the shallowness i felt while reading this one tho.. i still say 8 for the lay out and poem. ~Autumn
Re: A Blind Child Speaks by Grandma	9-Mar-05/8:14 AM
i think this little poem is very sweet, and holds much truth. thank you for sharing. blessings ~Autumn
Re: Memories by RION12	8-Mar-05/9:17 PM
take your memories, learn something from every even good or bad in your life... then it makes everything youve endured worth while, make a negitive memory or even a positive turning point and valuble lesson in life.. and you cant help but be grateful for memories. workes for me ;) ~Autumn
Re: Do You Need Me? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR	8-Mar-05/9:15 PM
Im not sure, i think i have an issue with the thought that you think someone would be "invisable without you.... like thats crap for sure, and be honest with yourself here we ALL have problems, and if you feel so used and mis-needed then why?? why?
Re: wishes by the_poetess	8-Mar-05/9:10 PM
its truly sad how most live in the box our society has created, personaly im waiting for the news flash that all will change we will be shed of the elite control that seeks to conform us at every corner.. so sad, but hope holds strong for many, we will be free and our lives will once again be ours to live, freely without restraint, or repression, find a feild and run, do what ever empowers you, what ever rekindles that spark. and above all...Step away from the chocolates no hope of flyin with searching for happiness in a truffle box! ~Autumn
Re: Striking minds by celticskatermatt1	8-Mar-05/8:58 PM
? i feel like i missing something here....... or is it just me /:?
Re: Get Away by Miggy	8-Mar-05/8:51 PM
not bad, speeks loudly of how so many would rather complain about thier lives then really take the steps to figure it out and solve their problems, yet it always seems to help by being there to listen and offer support and simple obvious unjudgemental advice rather then ignore those in need.... ~Autumn