| Re: In my weakest hour, I find my true strength by Rainbow_chaser |
29-Jul-02/2:33 PM |
heiio, i am sorry, i do not recognize this word. could you explain further?
please. :) thank you.
Autumn.<Rainbow_chaser
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| Re: In my weakest hour, I find my true strength by Rainbow_chaser |
30-Jul-02/7:26 AM |
I agree, i had a hard time with this poem, making it all cometogeather. It was just a movement of built up emotion, didnt really
work on it much. I have never wrote apoem that wasnt a rhyming poem, dont know that
i can. Do you find my other poems to be as rough as this one??, and thak you for your feed back. :)
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| Re: A Nation by the_poetess |
8-Mar-05/8:46 PM |
i love a good eye opening poem. good job, im not american, blessed be.
but as a human i agree.
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| Re: Get Away by Miggy |
8-Mar-05/8:51 PM |
not bad, speeks loudly of how so many would rather complain about thier lives then really take the steps to figure it out and solve their problems, yet it always seems to help by being there to listen and offer support and simple obvious unjudgemental advice rather then ignore those in need....
~Autumn
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Mar-05/8:56 PM |
its simple, yet felt desperate, if its ment to be, it shall be, if not then the real thing will be felt tenfold by both people.
Good luck
~Autumn
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| Re: Striking minds by celticskatermatt1 |
8-Mar-05/8:58 PM |
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i feel like i missing something here....... or is it just me /:?
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| Re: wishes by the_poetess |
8-Mar-05/9:10 PM |
its truly sad how most live in the box our society has created, personaly im waiting for the news flash that all will change we will be shed of the elite control that seeks to conform us at every corner.. so sad, but hope holds strong for many, we will be free and our lives will once again be ours to live, freely without restraint, or repression, find a feild and run, do what ever empowers you, what ever rekindles that spark. and above all...Step away from the chocolates no hope of flyin with searching for happiness in a truffle box!
~Autumn
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| Re: Do You Need Me? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR |
8-Mar-05/9:15 PM |
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Im not sure, i think i have an issue with the thought that you think someone would be "invisable without you.... like thats crap for sure, and be honest with yourself here we ALL have problems, and if you feel so used and mis-needed then why?? why?
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| Re: Memories by RION12 |
8-Mar-05/9:17 PM |
take your memories, learn something from every even good or bad in your life... then it makes everything youve endured worth while, make a negitive memory or even a positive turning point and valuble lesson in life.. and you cant help but be grateful for memories.
workes for me ;)
~Autumn
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| Re: A Blind Child Speaks by Grandma |
9-Mar-05/8:14 AM |
i think this little poem is very sweet, and holds much truth. thank you for sharing.
blessings
~Autumn
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| Re: Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL |
9-Mar-05/8:20 AM |
well im not sure what to say here, its a well writen poem, hats off to that. can say im supper big on the shallowness i felt while reading this one tho.. i still say 8 for the lay out and poem.
~Autumn
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| Re: How to make a suicide bomber by Caducus |
9-Mar-05/8:34 AM |
ahh the world is over runn with heartlessness, a poem that holds a fraction of events that occur daily, and then others sit by and judge without understanding.
so sad.
~Autumn
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| Re: Today, last year was on a Sunday by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
9-Mar-05/11:46 AM |
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not bad, but i really enjoyed the last sentance. it really brought it togeather and gave it more meaning over all.
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| Re: Subtle Reasons by crooked_smile |
10-Mar-05/11:24 AM |
great poem, perhaps i dont agree with the no straight answer part, but thats just diffence in opinion or belief. but over all im lovin this poem!
9
~Autumn
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Mar-05/6:29 AM |
Well I've come to find you to be a completly selfish, judgemetal, ass. I must say i rather enjoyed your poem.
Very vivid.
Good job
~9~
~Autumn
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| Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
16-Mar-05/12:18 PM |
WOW! I'm lacking anything to say, other then this poem is brilliant. So touching, so deep. utterly amazing, I disagree with the comments of it being to lengthly. Perfection is all i can think of.
****10****
~Autumn
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