Re: A Nation by the_poetess	8-Mar-05/8:46 PM
i love a good eye opening poem. good job, im not american, blessed be. but as a human i agree.
Re: a comment on Half Empty, Half Whole by Rainbow_chaser	8-Mar-05/8:36 PM
ah youthful even at 23 when writting this poem i dont recall feeling youthful but it is a wonderful thought. I just felt i had to respond to the comment you left here, to me it sounded like you were implying weighing of the soul set you up as being a failure... was this correct? I disagree with the woe is me comment as well. Perhapes if i had left this poem in hopes of some attention to how i was feeling at this low point in my life then i could see your point, but being a person who just writes to move emotion i disagree. Could you tell me honestly that you have never experianced situations that have weighed your soul so to speek?. ... perhaps not and your diffrent from the rest of us, hats off to you then. lol what im getting at here is that growth can come from moving emotion on a seemingly hopeless situation a persone may be faced with, obviously at this time i felt very lonely, and that i felt asthough i was on a search for a needle in a haystack, yes i felt hopeless, i felt like turning my back and giving up... but simply writting this very simple rather boring poem, i gave myself a key to unlock the emotion.... therefore moving the deperate feeling of lonelyness and the urge to give up, . let me ask you this have you ever felt like you were up against the whole world....and all you had the energy left to do, was crawl into bed and nap? i can tell you this, when i write i write with ever fiber of my core, and move pure emotion, openly and honestly, i leave it for a day or two, come back and read over what i wrote. do you know what i get from this? a peek into myself, without denials or doubt or shame, no front no bullshit just pure emotion, by rereading what i have written i can then see it from a diffrent stand point, and see what it is i need to do to move forward. Hell im my own damn shrink :D and the price is much more affordable. lol ~Autumn P.S~ just one more thing, maybe not all of us post our writting in hopes of making it big as writters, alot of us post our writtings in hopes of making it by, in life. Or i know i do.
Re: a comment on Calling My Essence From The Gap by Rainbow_chaser	8-Mar-05/7:59 PM
Hello there, i just want to thank you, when you left a message i was able to find my way back to this site, it has been along while since my last visit. Im glad you enjoyed this poem, it means alot to me, and its nice to hear another felt some of what i felt when i wrote it. thank you once again~ ~Autumn
Re: a comment on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser	8-Mar-05/7:56 PM
Well Mother earth being the female polar aspect, that would leave father creator as the male polar aspect..would it not? hence the phraze "mother earth father sky". if you really look around you will find a polar balance in everything, it is the key to healing all. hope this helped ;)
Re: a comment on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser	8-Mar-05/7:53 PM
yes i am aware my writting comes across weak at times, but i do write to move inner emotional blocks. I dont dream of ever going anywhere with my writtings, as you can obviously see i have little schooling. Writting to me is mearly a movment, a vent, a release of emotion, thought or experiances perhaps to painful to move safely in any other way.... behind our fronts we place as a safe guard........we are all human beings, striving to hide the obvious. Pretending to stride through life unscathed, when the majority bearly hold togeather enough to bringforth and follow through with why it is they are here to begin with. "Practice"..well they say it makes perfect, at 26 i see myself with the rest of my life to grow learn and evolve towards "Better". Reading well one could never read or learn enough. As for the weak writtings..... i must say this, true strength is found in utter weakness, if one would only look around and grow from each experiance.... well then all could benifit from alittle weakness. i must also add this, in every writting that comes from the heart or soul of every person. You will find a check point for every step along a path in their lives, and looking back years later over recorded thought, emotion and experiance. It is a very sobering realization of the growth that one can make in a small amount of time. So look at it as a growth chart, a positive force to continue moving forward on your path. I write not for the praise of another i write and share some of what i feel and endure in hopes of perhaps letting another (who might be at that very same check point on their own path) Know they are not alone, that we all feel.... 90% just try to walk around pretending they are "strong" or never feel alone or unsure of themselves...or perhaps they are just compleatly out of touch with who they really are..........?
Re: In my weakest hour, I find my true strength by Rainbow_chaser	30-Jul-02/7:26 AM
I agree, i had a hard time with this poem, making it all cometogeather. It was just a movement of built up emotion, didnt really work on it much. I have never wrote apoem that wasnt a rhyming poem, dont know that i can. Do you find my other poems to be as rough as this one??, and thak you for your feed back. :)
Re: In my weakest hour, I find my true strength by Rainbow_chaser	29-Jul-02/2:33 PM
heiio, i am sorry, i do not recognize this word. could you explain further? please. :) thank you. Autumn.<Rainbow_chaser