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20 most recent comments by The_Third_Isis (21-40)

Re: Come home by phbiscuit 24-Nov-03/8:16 PM
Im clicking my heels aunty M..I wish it was so easy to go home again...out on a rod ironed adorned balcony I I breathe in the cold air of the andes and run down the marbled and very polished stairs,for my daily hot chocolate with grandmummi..hot bread and honey butter at six a.m. thanks for taking me back. un 10 para usted phbiscuit, me encanto!.
Re: The Sahu by Bachus 24-Nov-03/8:28 PM
let's fly. I'll sprinkle you with stardust, and smooth out your golden wings.
Re: untitled (suggestions wanted) by Don-Quixote 24-Nov-03/10:01 PM
How about Sancho Panzas puberty... for the untitled heh,heh.Don I'am encantada que leiste mi poema, si es verdad sobre el tema 8 que lo de la harmonica quizas le falta practica, pero es uno de mis bebe's.And has alot of potential please, you are invited to continue giving me tips and bettering my poetry. how about the sonnata of the windmills..Thank you.Ciao bello!.
Re: The Chocolat Box by Samantha 24-Nov-03/10:12 PM
If life is a box of chocolates make mine Godiva dahlin. This piece is unique I like it Iam true to my selve's a wink from all of us. Chucles and giggles. I crown you with a 10!
regarding some deleted poem... 6-Dec-03/7:42 PM
Ti's the season Father fucker G'pa sucker for all wishes to come true.So I dont want no sugga plumms Heeel no!I want your Nutts saggy, "Yigga Hoa"slimed cheeseee translucent hollow sacks of sucked out magott sperm. Roasting on an open fire. Pleaseee say you will stop by, south beach is looong empty and we will round up some reindeer to keep your anus bussy. whyle me and some colombian friends who love gringos like you keep your pulmonary edema and cerebral hemmorage moving right along. How do you say in (INGISH) chucle..did you say "pilminary?" O.K. uno, dos, tres,let it snow let it snow... Here in florida, we have the right combo for you Mr gringo. Why you just never know what santa sends my way.Keep talking shit about peoples children...word to the wise keep your eyes open for those little caroler's la.. la.. Jack frost nipping on your nose.."sipping on a lil bacardi" waiting on yah.. If your ass is (*}I doubt it. Them "deer" are going to have a field day.And I have the ham's and ropes all ready to take you a swiimmming BOY... yesss sir.
Re: Everytime by krazymofo321 6-Dec-03/7:45 PM
I say the same damn thang when i look at my pet lobster. Blessed with a 7
Re: Letting Go by ThoughtfulSoul 6-Dec-03/7:58 PM
Having someone come down on you is not too bad.. did he/she have bad breath? it's like this you start humming on the road again or Hit the road jack whatever it may be, make an excuse to go just go...because hell wherever you go there you are..love is for ever but during the holidays its a bitch like me..so i give you a 9, try not to strain unless its kegell hold it 1 trhu 10.. or an exorsism and you cant keep that father fuckeeeng demon down..slammm that prick hard with J. Mannings torn lifeless arm.Happy decking the halls with the same fellows, cranium or was it he's "pilminarys lungs"whatever... drink some misttle toe eggnog for me it will make things not soconfusing and bitter ,cheers!
Re: Thankless by shadowaura 6-Dec-03/8:03 PM
You can do better things with mirrors..get your lover in on it {smile}all you have left is a mess but if you love him lick it of..then use windex on that mirror happy is a great state of mind, at least for 10 minutes
merry xmas.a 8
Re: Fireworks on an Open Sky by capachijim 6-Dec-03/8:11 PM
That how i felt when I loved my only love at dawn.dimed all th lights the heat brought out the auras like fireworks.. But dark is not bad..as you wait upon the next heat in the tall savanah grass my tiger eyes dream and paint the sky with past lavender, blue,gold ,red as fire filled dawns. Thanks it's a 10
Re: xxxmas by kingit 6-Dec-03/8:24 PM
are magotts larvae..are silk worms larvae? well dunno im sooo happpy now i can swimm to key largo and drag J.Mannings chewed up corpus delictai.. and not feel the weight of hes deer punctured ass.Cheers to you i will drink to that xmas mess an happy new year..got's to go and dance, my sexy smooth, stand up and take notice, peachy clean untouched ass till the brake of dawn and then some. & I will kick your's Manning from one side of the missi to honolulu! I"ll drink to that..
in company of my friends who are waiting on you santa's lil helpers...come on down.
regarding some deleted poem... 7-Dec-03/9:56 AM
O.k. it's 12;10 pm here 8;am.Cali or wherever you may be.I do have a hangover, and i'm sorry for the slipshod ,lol comments last night, with the exception to J. Manning's .This noon I'm listening to some SKA loud and saxophoneee yep,wide awake. I will try not to[misspeeel] this time .This poem "That sound" is plain unatural..Why? Gma is lucky she didint step on a copperhead or diamond back...sipping cuban coffe.If you are a potatoe picker you may not know that rabbits
SHRIEK a high pitched irritating..well like J.Manning would being that he is soooo full of shit, thats what he does fat ole ass on the toilet high pitched shrill that would make anyone snap he's wart hog neck. Children scream, yell,sing.Rabbitts are scandalous creatures like some people no composure "LOUD let me tell you all about, it scrambling, blaming, YOU made me into a,a yes that's it a rabbitt hah..and worst yet running around barefoot amongst copperheads,tigers, and well "potatoe pickers"..I,d ratter be a worm spinn my silk, be the SPICE thats cool. BUNNY's ..YUCK. well moral of this be a man or a J.Manning shrieking rabbit lol..Happy Holidays.this did turn my head and pee my pantie with laughter, se la vie thanks for the chucles
wiping coffe of my nose.An 8 CIAO!!
regarding some deleted poem... 7-Dec-03/12:32 PM
Messages are only mixed when others want to see it that way, otherwise the message is "what it is" to each unique individual.Laura needs at some point as all of us will to let go,1]It means not to regret the past, but to grow and live for the future.2]To let go is not to judge, but to allow another to be a human being.3]To let go is not to deny, but to accept.
And finally all of us on a cellular/spiritual level can accept as a simple fact that "I"do feel what I feel
no matter how irrational,then I can quit trying to convince you and can get about the bussiness of understanding what's behind {My} irrational feeling's
not YOUR"S.And when that's clear, the answers are OVIOUS and I dont need advice.Irrational FEELINGS make sense when we understand whats behind them.
It doesnt mean I dont LOve you {you know who you are}
It means I just am me and you are you.Wheter you listen with your mouth and have selective hearing.
We all indulge in nasty deeds but they are Mine and yours to deal with. If we LISTEN more and speak with your heart, and not let your mind EDIT that WE then will not FAIL each other LAURA'S,& Clive"S whrn I tell you how I feel and you tell me why I should not feel that way..you know all everyone else is stupid and only YOU hurt, you are trampeling on my feelings..I have a heart that loves you, and a soul that listens.
regarding some deleted poem... 7-Dec-03/8:07 PM
The name will beat to ornella,cruella, ornella..boom,bangboom..it's been years..ok maybe -months,and them dalmatian puppy's still havent returned.But why? never mind she still has her skin fold, well flank's of soldiers stand beside her, she'll be bussy for awhyle,they will sing in acapella "all the way for this wipes his sword of -blood" [Al the great] cant wayt forpart 2. Good tidings to you where ever you go and I wish you a merry Xmas and a..10 por vu
Re: Why you don't fall through the floor by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 7-Dec-03/8:42 PM
A xmas cock-tail to beat all Quantum pressure , tall frosty glass the only normalisation factor in this concoction ahem..2 shots of bacardi rum 151 better yet
will make it really elemental for this holiday season no need to invite the neighboors they will get a lil -bit wink..ahem quantro what the hell..be generous, all the stolish you want. As 33 a dash,H1 yep,He2 what the hell laugh a bit,N7 a bit expensive but why not,Pu94 a
pinch of criptonite you'll fly anyhow just to be sure extra momentum now don't bother to shake, make it pretty and light it. pressureP=Boom now that's how to be a particle in a box happy reincarnation!!I'll drink eggnog with a shot of 151 hold the extras, a quantum 10
Re: Saying of Love by UrbaneSavvy 7-Dec-03/9:17 PM
ahhhh love,amore I've only tasted the ambrosia of this orchis/family but once [I mean the taste of love real love]it gave me asthenia.I am a godess so i recovered a bit quicker.I even lived in orcus because of it. My own creation..same birth mark distinguish from others characterize, make clear,boundary,mine. yet another century he is my bezel.Real love is eternal "Live as if you were to die tommorow.learn as if you were to live forever"
Mahatma Gandhi. this touched my diamond hard heart a 9
regarding some deleted poem... 7-Dec-03/9:54 PM
You are a fountain of exquisite word play. We women are gentle to hold, and IF we fly away, or choose to stay either way, they can still be miserable. 10
regarding some deleted poem... 7-Dec-03/10:14 PM
Quiro hacer el amor contigo,AHAAA and por favor jurame que nunca te iras,I want to make many beautiful things Mi cuerpo te nesesita tanto, por favor...heeey this sound's like MY boyfriend.. just serius, lol
si eres muy erotica y sensual but leave my extra sexy tall dark and handsome hombre alone..do you live in coconut grove flo? Maybe you can borrow him so you can keep writing this latin stuff,but be very carefull he is a cobra de capello "danegerous".
FELIS NAVIDAD un 10
Re: Winter Lands: I by http://bandgeek 7-Dec-03/10:24 PM
Yikes soooo glad I'm no where near any of that till after xmas I caould harly handle california..with out a human fur coat a few blankets and alot of what wet dreams become a reality. I;30 am and the warm breeze is fluttering my satin robe...sigh keep your cats warm, and thanks for the well writen reminder of why I dont like real winter's. Best wishes to you and a hot apple cider my friend cheers.I need to sleep with only one silk sheet and no dry heat,that makes my nosebleed yuck. A 10 and to all a goood night!
Re: never come down by Freethinker1602 8-Dec-03/8:19 AM
Sooooo you liked the lip biting comment I do have a special cognizance and only IF [I like you alot and you taste divine.. BIG SMILE] On lip or bites of all kinds hard it depends on the moment but Lucy my brow is arched, it's the unholy days so here you go one for each jugular not toooo hard, and a nip for that upper lip since I got the bottom one last time gigle's.
I-sis the morning star is shining, you have little faint lavender bites on your sevres shoulders.leaving the fragrance of MYHRR,a dash of sulfur you love that hmmm? and gardenia my calling card I will dance thru your balcony like a bachante and disapear till next time as you sleep.Your comment was on 11/29 I was in Orcus with my mau [egyptian cat spotted striped.] you where in Paris?lol.Are you feeling dicrotic poor devil.
Drop the fear i go south like most godesses in the winter i'll come back to hold you tight and bite you harder wink..a 10
Re: The Morning Star by Shardik 8-Dec-03/8:46 AM
Was the monk my" saint" Rasputin/you are a Hungarian gypsy by blood can't get a transfusion.Think I found your soul clinging to mine on an agust night..This is more like you Passionate,bohemian,walking,thinking composing.Tarot the morning star.Ahhhhh holding it in the fresh dirt/musky smell of the grave yard arousing to those of us who have a pulse.This poem is fine and you are forever MINE. more than a nine 10


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