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Re: Memory Fragment I (lets kill eachother) by SupremeDreamer 8-Dec-03/8:59 AM
Lets not kill each other for now lets wayt till va
I liked your bravadoelentines day massacre 04. Hatred grrrrrr so passionate...There's more weed...kiss the stubborn sob I got one he's my pop's and hades was so afraid of letting him in that death turned it's back got paid of by satan. he survided a 11 hour operation, pulled he's breathing and nasal/g tube's out no -shit in intensive care /and is now meaner than ever..those pale as blue ice eyes of he's mean bussiness/ walking talking and kicking the doct's asses Kiss and love the ole bastard till v-day chucle. have a great xmas hope santa brings you some maui wowie or kauai electric. a 9
regarding some deleted poem... 8-Dec-03/11:22 AM
Yeeehaaa!! as you would guess mummi to 5 poetic
personalities and oops & the baphomet..did I forget anyone? and G-ma to the demi god's offspring so...dont
F-around J.Manning you are outnumbered i started young and i still am and strong NOT your average [mortal] that does sound's like my middle name and kisses too.
No I havent heard foxes but wolves mating at the brake
of dawn is very familiar to me.
And very distinct from a sreik,scream .Let's try a spine tingling hoooowl to get my blood pressure up
a notch..or with you howling shuushin baby and looking at me eye to eye perhaps a second notch.
I'am tantalized by most of your words.White bunny's [lets strapp one on J.Mng's bumm] it may take all day tough.Do another about let's see wolves tearing up a bunny named manning tender pink arse. HO. HO. HO.
regarding some deleted poem... 8-Dec-03/11:39 AM
The boy is a man /childwho lives in me I<am a hungarian/basquecolombian and some other spice mix wink and my male personality well is quite a wallop of a male ...aheeem I would never loan out my real boyfriend cuz I love him to mucho and he is very expensive lol...however if you keep writing these romantico poemas you will exsite,"FIRE MAMASITA"
alot of latino/latina poet's from all over the world OLE!!! AND this bull fighter will take the ear and tail both all mine too!!!!UN BESO>
Re: No delusions. by darby pyn 8-Dec-03/12:03 PM
How did I miss this sensitive poem, like the last 3 #s on my cmputer 151 I must of had one too many shots of it we celebrate all the rest of the year..I got my head clear now a jump in the ocean and fresh guava passion fruit xtra vitamins smoothy will do that. I reeeealy like this Yes karma is eternal but some souls are worth it. Under radar you must have your own radar better than a hoary bat to pull this of being able to pull it of you must feel the intruders body heat from afar have acute hearing be very brave and in love not just lust cuz you can get thaty at any grocery store.
If you knew it all alonf no respect you must have a surplus of the stuff..I COMAND respect lick my high heels NOW!!I dont have any regrets but I want a laaarge bed, rose petals and a "family jewel encrusted septer" for at least 24 hours ,skip the couc,-
the kitchen,sink keep the toasies they don't stink!!!BRING IT On santa baby!!!!XXXXa whisper te amo is not enough. a 10
Re: Painting the Town by dragonfly 9-Dec-03/8:55 PM
Some actions and words can leave you *spechless* Scent
isnt it so true like gingerbread,morning coffe-
dawn lingering in the air of course can be very INVIGORATING in an open market say medellin.
and compared to a stroll in buenos aires at the same hour..thank's for the visual of the web & the fly.
and to relive a few moments of my own.Keep leaving
me bread crumb's straight to you'r poems. CHEERS to your holidays.
Re: Urban Nights by capachijim 9-Dec-03/10:54 PM
WHY be blue this is good.Neon lighting by nature a 10
Re: Rustling Wind by laura2224rn 9-Dec-03/11:05 PM
you get a 9. for the elegance as oposed to hobos in 8t's hood. The contrast is finese, style and grace.
It's 2 a.m. and I'm of to dream with that vision in your poem thank you.A promice we all forget about at times.
regarding some deleted poem... 9-Dec-03/11:15 PM
I saw and felt all this when my g-baby Shadow blue was born one snowy november 99 in Flagstaff Az. Vision a gift to morph within the universe...I was walking with that lil papoose she is part navajo a week old, letting the soft snowflakes fall on her raven black hair..her little body warmed my hands. Thanks for taking me back to a wintry moment in Flagstaff. Happy holidays. a 10
Re: Night and day. by darby pyn 12-Dec-03/11:54 PM
Lets have one toghether* Cheers good worck.
I dont like to think about it either but...the lobster was good, so was the stephen king..I'll drink to that!
Re: Head. by darby pyn 13-Dec-03/12:03 AM
Awwww girrrrll you had to go there didn't sha?That''seedy'' sermon should never touch your lips unless it was angelic revelation in c minor heh..heh..you is a lil devil.That should always have a reservation, at the very least an open one!
Re: diamond of love by crwncka1 13-Dec-03/12:10 AM
Hello my name is walter and i'am a sheisteeer,a demon, a pshyco,an recovering assasin,a detoxed pilot of god!
"Heeey walter"..we came to beleive...yep.fa la la la la la la la happy unholydays..our men we love them so. ju
Re: Use Me by dragonfly 13-Dec-03/12:43 AM
Aheeemm..My brother sat me right down and he talked to me ,"about all this use me stuff" I sayd brother if y
you only knew if it feeeeels this good getting used..
you know the rest of this song...let me feeel why tough you are letting this s.o.b.use you up and how goood it feeels to you child...are you with me* 8.
Re: The generosity of others. by darby pyn 13-Dec-03/12:48 PM
I'am flatered by your most gratus comment...may i set the mood?I'll take of B.holliday" and put on "give it away now" by t.r.hot chili pepp's.I love your verse I will borrow a bit to put light on your voyerism you have my 'perssimon' to enter the realm any time.Dizzy from the icy smoke coated player's,diamond crotches,& gold plated card pay the rent..again.Manicured widowssucking on elated but almost dead "mates".Well dressed in sin he's mothers heart does beat within he's own.He will make more $$than bin ladin,publishing he's circumcision, and yes he's beloved Jocastas jealus son /scor. A tooth like decision.So untwist the noose and chag the messenger like h. kissinger under the misttletoe. your's get's a 10 I gott to run to south beach and get my claws manicured MEEEAAOOOW, for now.
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Dec-03/1:53 AM
Back to life back to reality...me gusto mucho..
your play with words, "i arrange my atoms"..only IF
you are a free agent.And those fng cats, arent they
just so prrrrrfucked?
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Dec-03/2:01 AM
He got to...And Gods mother too and Let us NOT forget the aciatic camels that Gaspar, Balthazar and Melchor rode on too. [the 3 magis names].. ahhh to be a fukeee!!! pass the frankincence MARY!
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Dec-03/2:05 AM
Ola bebe..more tequila down at S.beach
tu lugar o el mio? Your place again??? or mine?
The milk has been thrown out ,but the eggnog is fresh!

Re: Pyrrhus smoked the sun by SupremeDreamer 19-Dec-03/2:23 AM
Your Modus operendi, thrills me to the core really.
A "mime" speaking in silence, but yet penetrating
the mind, with azure recolections of what it was,
as with a piercing of a spear.Bravo a 10+

regarding some deleted poem... 19-Dec-03/11:41 AM
Mi angel ..si no te exito, [My angel, if I dont exsite you]You wont stay to clean up the house. And you know how dirty we can make it lol..With thong's here and fresh fruit there.Your corazon has the beat I need. que no?Your turn to write, muy sexy..CIAO
Re: Gifts by miraclemaker 19-Dec-03/11:54 AM
Thank's for the advice, we all have our styles and I'am new at this, "Trips everywhere and anywhere imaginable," I write about that my Trips. mind, creativity,and a lot of passion,into your heart
if you allow it and the heart's of others. NO Permission to leave is the freedom that an aquarian soul like me needs to stay and express my "gifts"
of creativity.Thanks for putting your words out in the univerce..happy holidays.A 10

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regarding some deleted poem... 19-Dec-03/11:59 AM
Eres un ser muy inteligente,me gusta tu trabajo.
Thanks for taking the time to read my femenine toughts.
Ciao amor. 9


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