regarding some deleted poem...	19-Feb-04/6:32 PM
Woodstick - a clear analogy with Woodtick. Brilliant! -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Feb-04/6:43 PM
I feel that the full-stops at the end of each line make the whole thing particularly poignant. I know exactly what you mean about being stabbed in the back! My ex-husband once stole all my marzipan, which I was saving for a special occasion. I really feel like you can share my pain. Hey, you've just got to ride things out and wait for the gootimes to roll around again. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Feb-04/6:58 PM
You will never die alone. I will come an fuck your corpse. Only joking!!!! I really like this great poem!!!!! -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Feb-04/7:07 PM
Would you ever actually consider saying this out loud, let alone singing it? Here are the highlights of rubbishdom: a)But i don't need a fucking sunrise b)But now my ignorance came back to me Breaking the chains and setting this heart free c)Doesn't mean you can't have your candlelight dinners d)Don't need a fucking sunrise Don't give a shit 'bout a sunset Used to admire your bright blue eyes Unfortunately, Poemranker's ranking system does not go low enought to do justice to these cataclysmic lyrics, so I will have to be content with awarding you a -0-
Re: Enlightenment by Lifeboatman	19-Feb-04/7:13 PM
I forgot about when the stars twinkeld and summer was a joyous warmth, but then I remebered again.
Re: Rinse by somemorepoetry	19-Feb-04/7:14 PM
This poem made me remember how excellent I am.
Re: Upon Arrival of Flight 179 to DIA by MacFrantic	19-Feb-04/7:22 PM
I admire your disregard for the stale conventions of punctuation. It makes the poem so much more ambiguous and less eloquent. Excellent! I also like the way the sudden mention of a parrot seems so wacky and obscure. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Feb-04/6:11 PM
It is not yet spring. Please resubmit this poem on 21st March.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Feb-04/6:27 PM
What did you give up? Poety?
Re: Opposites by BrandonW	26-Feb-04/6:28 PM
Then riddle me this, oh wise one: What is the opposite of mediocre?
Re: Translation by Dovina	4-Jul-04/2:28 PM
You seem to be suggesting there is some merit in an idea that can only be adequately articulated in one language. What buncombe. A meaningful statement can be expressed in any comprehensive language, such as English, and any information lost in the translation can only be meaningless, emotive hogwash.
Re: Fancy by reanna	4-Jul-04/2:34 PM
This poem is utterly unintelligible - the unmistakable hallmark of excellent poetry!!!!1
Re: Tapestry Years by Quarton	4-Jul-04/2:36 PM
A think of life as being more of a sort of crochet.
Re: Your sad goodbye by sanity	4-Jul-04/2:38 PM
I like the way you use clouds as a metaphor for the human condition.
Re: Recycled Stardust by Quarton	4-Jul-04/2:49 PM
Hello. Perhaps I can shed some light on this matter. I have a degree in science from Strathclyde Univesity, and I can confirm that: a) This poem is wrong b) Science is true.
Re: Cool car!! by DR Limerick	6-Jul-04/4:38 PM
Having a doctorate in limerick construction, I expect you are free to experiment with all kinds of new forms of limerick, for example ones which have completely the wrong number of sylables and don't scan at all. I particularly enjoy your own brand of ambient lounge limerick.
Re: Unsung california dreamin. by SupremeDreamer	7-Jul-04/4:02 AM
Are you from California? Would you say teen sitcom "California Dreams" was an acurate representation of your life?
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jul-04/4:07 AM
I had a similar experience when I returned from 'Nam.
Re: A Piñon Limb by Dovina	8-Jul-04/2:59 AM
I think you should change "By winter’s glistening jewels" to "By winter's glistening jowls." It would make the poem flow more beautifully.
Re: Mm, Shoes... ? by fevriere	9-Jul-04/4:07 PM
The title promises shoes, but the poem only disappoints. To me, there is nothing more erotic than a cardboard box full of sweaty trainers.