| Re: Somber Like My Pain by TwilightDawned |
9-Jul-04/4:11 PM |
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I can only assume, given that you have spelled Splinter with a capital S, that you are referring to Splinter off of the Turtles. But what sight could be so horrible that it would make your head literally turn into Splinter off of the Turtles? This poem really doesn't stand up to scrutiny.
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| Re: Ze invsible limerick by DR Limerick |
10-Jul-04/5:39 AM |
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An excellent example of the zero syllable limerick.
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| Re: Friends Forever? by nicole081083 |
10-Jul-04/5:53 AM |
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I think this would work better if you reworked it into a limerick.
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| Re: The circle of life by sanity |
10-Jul-04/5:58 AM |
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What about when the sun explodes?
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| Re: The Ladies and the Bum by Dovina |
10-Jul-04/6:18 AM |
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You deleted all my comments. Unprofessional.
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11-Jul-04/6:42 AM |
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Yout can't forgive yourself. Jesu wouldn't like that at all.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Jul-04/1:48 PM |
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What's the point of all the indentation? If you read this poem out, how would it sound different from a poem that was left aligned, but otherwise identical? Also, what do the full stops at the top and ottom add?
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| Re: Desperation by gavinduff |
12-Jul-04/9:23 AM |
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hi. i realy like your poem!!!1
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| Re: All Alone by pinay_miss_azn |
12-Jul-04/4:00 PM |
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Hey, this is really great!!1 It reminds me of my new poem. Can I make a suggestion? I reckon "perchance" would be better as "peradventure."
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| Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
12-Jul-04/4:05 PM |
My favorite bit is :
A shoe-string, dear? Bright red. Short
It cannot be for an adultâs shoe.
Genius
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13-Jul-04/3:01 PM |
"Supercalifrag-
"ilisticexpiali-
"docious," said Mary.
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13-Jul-04/3:06 PM |
I tried reading this poem aloud, by first pausing for exactly 1 minute, 27 seconds, then suddenly standing up and shouting "quim," and then sitting down again for another four minutes before ending the sentence. Was this right?
Anyway, a beautiful piece. I think the structure lends a peculiar, yet not unpleasing, ambiance.
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13-Jul-04/3:30 PM |
Charles Olson also wrote this revolutionary discourse on projective data entry:
http://www.hal-pc.org/journal/feb02/Column/nibbles/nibbles.html
It is much more creative than the stagnant conventional methods of data entry, I'm sure you'll agree.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Jul-04/4:04 PM |
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Stop trying to pretend you know anything about James Joyce.
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14-Jul-04/4:25 PM |
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Is this about tossing off? The last four lines especially make me think so.
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| Re: swallow it by anonandonandon |
14-Jul-04/4:26 PM |
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I find this crude and offensive.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Jul-04/4:03 PM |
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So do you believe in God or not?
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| Re: Southern Mississippii Standstill by wilco |
16-Jul-04/5:00 PM |
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When I think of southern USA, I imagine swamps and those boats that look a bit like hovercrafts, and men with dungarees and pitchforks and pigs under their arms. And also of Lynyrd Skynyrd. Maybe you should work these things into your poem.
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| Re: I Love You by QuirkyWonder |
16-Jul-04/5:01 PM |
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| Re: Priority by MacFrantic |
16-Jul-04/5:04 PM |
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