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Opposites

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Feb 2004 · 4 comments

Sporadic yet systematic Is the pattern and the pace Of this thing I call my life Neglected; dually respected What a war I wage - To keep my piece of mind. Pathetic but copacetic - No, I cant let it Smother me this way. Address it, dont repress it You have a voice, express it Your bleak cacophony.

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[8] zodiac 26-Feb-04/1:01 PM Reply

You had me until "this thing I call my life". Ugh. And congratulations on your use of the word copacetic. It's the fashizzle.

[n/a] BrandonW › zodiac 26-Feb-04/8:22 PM Reply

Its a good thing I had you for a whole two lines, <smirks> heh. Ugh, what would you suggest? This life I call my thing? Post script, copacetic is fo' shizzle dizzle!

[6] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 26-Feb-04/6:28 PM Reply

Then riddle me this, oh wise one:

What is the opposite of mediocre?

[n/a] BrandonW › ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 26-Feb-04/8:24 PM Reply

Well, if mediocre is somewhere in the middle... Then somewhere just a little left of the middle is my best guess.