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Opposites (Free verse) by BrandonW

Sporadic yet systematic Is the pattern and the pace Of this thing I call my life Neglected; dually respected What a war I wage - To keep my piece of mind. Pathetic but copacetic - No, I cant let it Smother me this way. Address it, dont repress it You have a voice, express it Your bleak cacophony.

zodiac 26-Feb-04/1:01 PM
You had me until "this thing I call my life". Ugh. And congratulations on your use of the word copacetic. It's the fashizzle.




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