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Enlightenment (Free verse) by Lifeboatman Let go and forget
For there are those who remember
When once the stars twinkled
And summer was a joyous warmth
But those who do had bled and fled
Before your burning heart
So let go and forget
That you may again remember
Up the ladder:
The boomerang holiday
Down the ladder:
What is it about brothers?
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Posted: February 19, 2004 6:49 PM PST; Last modified: February 19, 2004 6:49 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0715218 Overall Rank: 6602 Comments:
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?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 163.1.234.177
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19-Feb-04/7:13 PM
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I forgot about when the stars twinkeld and summer was a joyous warmth, but then I remebered again.
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Lifeboatman @ 203.131.94.18
> ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
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19-Feb-04/7:45 PM
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Good for you then... I don't
hey - its not bad at all.
are you trying to loose the wings?
nah... Trying too revive it, thanks for the vote...
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