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Enlightenment (Free verse) by Lifeboatman
Let go and forget For there are those who remember When once the stars twinkled And summer was a joyous warmth But those who do had bled and fled Before your burning heart So let go and forget That you may again remember

Up the ladder: The boomerang holiday
Down the ladder: Horny Hornswoggling

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6566
Posted: February 19, 2004 6:49 PM PST; Last modified: February 19, 2004 6:49 PM PST
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[5] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 163.1.234.177 | 19-Feb-04/7:13 PM | Reply
I forgot about when the stars twinkeld and summer was a joyous warmth, but then I remebered again.
[n/a] Lifeboatman @ 203.131.94.18 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 19-Feb-04/7:45 PM | Reply
Good for you then... I don't
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 19-Feb-04/7:35 PM | Reply
hey - its not bad at all.

are you trying to loose the wings?
[n/a] Lifeboatman @ 203.131.94.18 > Shuushin | 19-Feb-04/7:52 PM | Reply
nah... Trying too revive it, thanks for the vote...
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