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Enlightenment (Free verse) by Lifeboatman

Let go and forget For there are those who remember When once the stars twinkled And summer was a joyous warmth But those who do had bled and fled Before your burning heart So let go and forget That you may again remember

Shuushin 19-Feb-04/7:35 PM
hey - its not bad at all.

are you trying to loose the wings?




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