on Loki's Tryst by OneFingerAnswer
31 Aug 2003, 7:47 PM
Hrmm.. i might not care for greek mythology poetry, but i think you just sold me on the Norse poetry..
Dont ask me why i like one and not the other.. because im human, opinionated, and am cursed with a discriminative taste organ, aka tongue.
9.
Dont ask me why i like one and not the other.. because im human, opinionated, and am cursed with a discriminative taste organ, aka tongue.
9.
on goofy poem to prove I'm not morbid (Ode to an Onion) by greym0on
1 Sep 2003, 3:18 AM
"If Eve had tempted Adam
With you -
Instead of a paltry Apple...
We would still be roaming Paradise"
and smelling his bad breath... i think my plum idea is a better one.. ;/
blessed with 7.
With you -
Instead of a paltry Apple...
We would still be roaming Paradise"
and smelling his bad breath... i think my plum idea is a better one.. ;/
blessed with 7.
on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2003, 9:42 PM
nice work. 8.
on The Uraeus (title by horus) by Y2kSlamPoet
20 Sep 2003, 1:40 AM
Thanks horus, i hated the original title.. i was sucked dry of ideas at the time.
on some deleted poem
19 Sep 2003, 5:02 PM
wonderful. love it. 10
on Difficult Decisions by EAger to Offend
20 Sep 2003, 2:04 AM
immortality has little to do with your physical body.
blessed with 8
blessed with 8
on Ashes to Ashes by Irischer Junge
1 Sep 2003, 7:09 PM
Ashes to ashes,
Dust to dust.
when these first two lines appear, i get annoyed, because its simply starting out with one hell of an overused phrase.. this just, makes me feel like puking on it.
3
Dust to dust.
when these first two lines appear, i get annoyed, because its simply starting out with one hell of an overused phrase.. this just, makes me feel like puking on it.
3
on Paranoia & the thinnest curtain by Jeremi B. Handrinos
31 Aug 2003, 7:53 PM
Hrmm, might i suggest a subtitle:
Claustrophobic Tweaker
-shrug- just a thought anyway, your poem sparked this idea..
9.
Claustrophobic Tweaker
-shrug- just a thought anyway, your poem sparked this idea..
9.
on Wit and Eloquence by Lifeboatman
1 Sep 2003, 3:36 AM
Well, now that the space is gone, it flashed light a big surprise into my face!! good! the effect is much better.
Good work on the ascii drawing this time.. not as good as one of settles masterpieces, but its no longer "crappy".
8!
Good work on the ascii drawing this time.. not as good as one of settles masterpieces, but its no longer "crappy".
8!
on Detective vs Doctor (The Explaination) by Y2kSlamPoet
31 Aug 2003, 9:30 PM
dont worry, im still not a christian, and am doomed to never be blessed with religion.
on some deleted poem
8 Oct 2003, 4:57 AM
joe, you need to learn of how to use language in a humorous manner- attention grabbing verses that incite chuckles..
now if you made this street scene less "sleepsville", its the kind of thing that gets me thinking:
jesus christ- cant i get a drive by shooting in this? an old mans pants leaking shit, a major car crash while these damned morons dance?
get what im saying?
now if you made this street scene less "sleepsville", its the kind of thing that gets me thinking:
jesus christ- cant i get a drive by shooting in this? an old mans pants leaking shit, a major car crash while these damned morons dance?
get what im saying?
on Joe-Joe's Retard Trinity Remix (There can be only one) by Y2kSlamPoet
8 Oct 2003, 8:20 AM
There, isnt that much more lively?
on The Secret Jungle Keys by Y2kSlamPoet
27 Oct 2003, 4:46 PM
Shitball fights are fun,
-but snow doesnt smell!-
yes, and theres no color either, how dull damnit.
-but snow doesnt smell!-
yes, and theres no color either, how dull damnit.
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2003, 4:51 PM
nice, some spelling errors though.
i remember speaking to my father when he was dying.. i tried to learn babble then, since he lost his speaking ability two weeks after the doctors declared him to be terminal.. ah well.
blessed with 8.
i remember speaking to my father when he was dying.. i tried to learn babble then, since he lost his speaking ability two weeks after the doctors declared him to be terminal.. ah well.
blessed with 8.
on The Right to Life by Retaliate
27 Oct 2003, 4:59 PM
The right to life..
you know, all that is completely buttfucked when you consider the right to bear arms, but i liked the poem never-the-less.
Also, theres almost no other option for folks when voting- politicians here have become experts at playing monopoly.
Blessed with 7.
you know, all that is completely buttfucked when you consider the right to bear arms, but i liked the poem never-the-less.
Also, theres almost no other option for folks when voting- politicians here have become experts at playing monopoly.
Blessed with 7.
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2003, 5:25 PM
hey, shakespeare, can this love verse get any more.. "emo slush and the children of the korn?"
no offense.. but.. bah, what a horrible dish you gave us this time. 4.
no offense.. but.. bah, what a horrible dish you gave us this time. 4.
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2003, 5:33 PM
ah, if this is a parody.. its a pile of shit.. because its not fucking funny- whos your mentor? Darth Vader on crack and poppy seeds?
i sense much loathing in you. (oh wise one!- lmao, my starwar quotes tickle me)
your wheelchair needs power brakes. jesus recommends it.
i sense much loathing in you. (oh wise one!- lmao, my starwar quotes tickle me)
your wheelchair needs power brakes. jesus recommends it.
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2003, 5:48 PM
ah, if this is a parody.. its a pile of shit.. because its not fucking funny- whos your mentor? Darth Vader on crack and poppy seeds?
i sense much loathing in you. (oh wise one!- lmao, my starwar quotes tickle me)
your wheelchair needs power brakes. jesus recommends it.
i sense much loathing in you. (oh wise one!- lmao, my starwar quotes tickle me)
your wheelchair needs power brakes. jesus recommends it.
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2003, 6:46 PM
sliver, go with the flow.
trust me.. its not as bad as it seems.. ;)
trust me.. its not as bad as it seems.. ;)
interesting.. probly the last line that moves me to vote on a haiku lol. 9