| Re: Loki's Tryst by OneFingerAnswer |
31-Aug-03/7:47 PM |
Hrmm.. i might not care for greek mythology poetry, but i think you just sold me on the Norse poetry..
Dont ask me why i like one and not the other.. because im human, opinionated, and am cursed with a discriminative taste organ, aka tongue.
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| Re: Paranoia & the thinnest curtain by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
31-Aug-03/7:53 PM |
Hrmm, might i suggest a subtitle:
Claustrophobic Tweaker
-shrug- just a thought anyway, your poem sparked this idea..
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| Re: Detective vs Doctor (The Explaination) by Y2kSlamPoet |
31-Aug-03/9:30 PM |
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dont worry, im still not a christian, and am doomed to never be blessed with religion.
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| Re: goofy poem to prove I'm not morbid (Ode to an Onion) by greym0on |
1-Sep-03/3:18 AM |
"If Eve had tempted Adam
With you -
Instead of a paltry Apple...
We would still be roaming Paradise"
and smelling his bad breath... i think my plum idea is a better one.. ;/
blessed with 7.
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| Re: Wit and Eloquence by Lifeboatman |
1-Sep-03/3:36 AM |
Well, now that the space is gone, it flashed light a big surprise into my face!! good! the effect is much better.
Good work on the ascii drawing this time.. not as good as one of settles masterpieces, but its no longer "crappy".
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| Re: Ashes to Ashes by Irischer Junge |
1-Sep-03/7:09 PM |
Ashes to ashes,
Dust to dust.
when these first two lines appear, i get annoyed, because its simply starting out with one hell of an overused phrase.. this just, makes me feel like puking on it.
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9-Sep-03/9:42 PM |
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| Re: The Shu & Horus & Planet X by Shardik |
19-Sep-03/4:36 PM |
last line caught me off guard.
interesting.. probly the last line that moves me to vote on a haiku lol. 9
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19-Sep-03/5:02 PM |
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| Re: The Uraeus (title by horus) by Y2kSlamPoet |
20-Sep-03/1:40 AM |
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Thanks horus, i hated the original title.. i was sucked dry of ideas at the time.
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| Re: Difficult Decisions by EAger to Offend |
20-Sep-03/2:04 AM |
immortality has little to do with your physical body.
blessed with 8
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8-Oct-03/4:57 AM |
joe, you need to learn of how to use language in a humorous manner- attention grabbing verses that incite chuckles..
now if you made this street scene less "sleepsville", its the kind of thing that gets me thinking:
jesus christ- cant i get a drive by shooting in this? an old mans pants leaking shit, a major car crash while these damned morons dance?
get what im saying?
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| Re: Joe-Joe's Retard Trinity Remix (There can be only one) by Y2kSlamPoet |
8-Oct-03/8:20 AM |
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There, isnt that much more lively?
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| Re: The Secret Jungle Keys by Y2kSlamPoet |
27-Oct-03/4:46 PM |
Shitball fights are fun,
-but snow doesnt smell!-
yes, and theres no color either, how dull damnit.
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27-Oct-03/4:51 PM |
nice, some spelling errors though.
i remember speaking to my father when he was dying.. i tried to learn babble then, since he lost his speaking ability two weeks after the doctors declared him to be terminal.. ah well.
blessed with 8.
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| Re: The Right to Life by Retaliate |
27-Oct-03/4:59 PM |
The right to life..
you know, all that is completely buttfucked when you consider the right to bear arms, but i liked the poem never-the-less.
Also, theres almost no other option for folks when voting- politicians here have become experts at playing monopoly.
Blessed with 7.
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27-Oct-03/5:25 PM |
hey, shakespeare, can this love verse get any more.. "emo slush and the children of the korn?"
no offense.. but.. bah, what a horrible dish you gave us this time. 4.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Oct-03/5:33 PM |
ah, if this is a parody.. its a pile of shit.. because its not fucking funny- whos your mentor? Darth Vader on crack and poppy seeds?
i sense much loathing in you. (oh wise one!- lmao, my starwar quotes tickle me)
your wheelchair needs power brakes. jesus recommends it.
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27-Oct-03/5:48 PM |
ah, if this is a parody.. its a pile of shit.. because its not fucking funny- whos your mentor? Darth Vader on crack and poppy seeds?
i sense much loathing in you. (oh wise one!- lmao, my starwar quotes tickle me)
your wheelchair needs power brakes. jesus recommends it.
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27-Oct-03/6:46 PM |
sliver, go with the flow.
trust me.. its not as bad as it seems.. ;)
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