| Re: Memorial Park by Mona Lisa |
20-Aug-03/11:47 AM |
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| Re: A gift by Birdman42s |
20-Aug-03/11:47 AM |
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| Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
20-Aug-03/11:49 AM |
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20-Aug-03/11:51 AM |
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very nice. I like the way it flows and closes.
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| Re: Dance With Me by marvelis |
20-Aug-03/11:52 AM |
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| Re: ? by Crakyamuni |
20-Aug-03/11:53 AM |
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I like this poem very much. It has emotion, fluid verse, and sort of...kind of reminds me of when I scratch a chaulk board for fun.
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20-Aug-03/12:07 PM |
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I like it, but something slipped somewhere in the middle. I'm not sure what it was. You're very good though. I can tell you're a very educated person. One of lyrical caliber to be reckoned with.
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| Re: I'll be your Gimp by GAY AS FU*K |
20-Aug-03/12:10 PM |
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Very interesting. Expressive in a provocative and unrelenting manor.
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| Re: Census by dragonfly |
20-Aug-03/12:55 PM |
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Hmmm I like the flow and message of this poem.
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| Re: Love-Anemic by dragonfly |
20-Aug-03/12:58 PM |
This poem is great. If I were you, I would keep it close to me and maybe rework it a few different ways just to see where it takes you. It has the essence of a def poetry performance for sure!
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| Re: To Lesley by Bahookie |
20-Aug-03/1:04 PM |
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not sure where this one was going.
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| Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin |
20-Aug-03/1:08 PM |
Did you write this or did someone else? Instead of inserting a phrase explaining your spelling errors, why not just take the time to use spell check?
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