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A gift (Free verse) by Birdman42s
A Gift I want to thank you For all that you are You always went the distance And never thought it was too far. You were the one who always listened To what i had to say You were always there To help in each and every way The one i could laugh with Every day before school The one who didn’t care If i made you look like a fool. You never turned away When i told you my fears Just sat there and listened And wiped away my tears. Before i met you I prayed every night That God would send me someone To make everything right. Hes sent me an angel You may not know who But look inside the mirror And you’ll see that it’s you.

Up the ladder: 22nd Anniversary
Down the ladder: That Girl Before

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 6.1009965
Overall Rank: 1131
Posted: August 12, 2003 10:32 AM PDT; Last modified: August 12, 2003 10:32 AM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] Birdman42s @ 68.224.202.41 | 12-Aug-03/10:32 AM | Reply
I wrote this for my best friend on her 18th birthday.
[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Aug-03/6:32 PM | Reply
You always make me giggle.
[3] god'swife @ 67.73.32.180 | 18-Aug-03/10:35 AM | Reply
Nice sentiment, terrible poem.
[3] Settle @ 67.75.22.253 | 20-Aug-03/5:54 AM | Reply
SHUT UP
[4] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 | 20-Aug-03/11:47 AM | Reply
kind of cliche'
[n/a] VorioBuche @ 12.82.168.56 | 26-Aug-03/3:40 PM | Reply
who invited the 16 year old suburban kids?
[6] deleted user @ 66.215.221.84 | 27-Aug-03/12:42 PM | Reply
nice
[8] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.109 | 2-Sep-03/10:09 PM | Reply
great poem, i like it
[7] Amythest @ 152.163.252.164 | 9-Sep-03/7:11 PM | Reply
Well Done :)
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