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? (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
Managing to destroy eloquence like love humor me I don't know you now, youre flesh to me lies are forever despondent ambiguous tense gnashing full of tremor I'll pretend not to notice this is forever.

Up the ladder: thought & memory
Down the ladder: Falling for Roy

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0666666
Weighted score: 5.939517
Overall Rank: 1402
Posted: August 11, 2003 10:34 PM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2003 10:34 PM PDT
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Comments:
[3] Settle @ 67.75.22.253 | 20-Aug-03/6:15 AM | Reply
the opening organ part of Roxy Music's "Editions of You" is stolen from "Brown Sugar"
[n/a] Crakyamuni @ 12.83.76.4 > Settle | 20-Aug-03/4:09 PM | Reply
Are you accusing me of ?!!
[9] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 | 20-Aug-03/11:53 AM | Reply
I like this poem very much. It has emotion, fluid verse, and sort of...kind of reminds me of when I scratch a chaulk board for fun.
[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 26-Aug-03/7:02 PM | Reply
Charming.
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