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Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Aug 2003 · 4 comments

Managing to destroy eloquence like love humor me I don't know you now, youre flesh to me lies are forever despondent ambiguous tense gnashing full of tremor I'll pretend not to notice this is forever.

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[3] Settle 20-Aug-03/6:15 AM Reply

the opening organ part of Roxy Music's "Editions of You" is stolen from "Brown Sugar"

[n/a] Crakyamuni › Settle 20-Aug-03/4:09 PM Reply

Are you accusing me of ?!!

[9] J.B. Manning 20-Aug-03/11:53 AM Reply

I like this poem very much. It has emotion, fluid verse, and sort of...kind of reminds me of when I scratch a chaulk board for fun.

[9] horus8 26-Aug-03/7:02 PM Reply

Charming.