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? (Free verse) by Crakyamuni Managing to destroy eloquence like love
humor me
I don't know you now, youre flesh to me
lies are forever
despondent ambiguous tense
gnashing full of tremor
I'll pretend not to notice
this is forever.
Up the ladder:
thought & memory
Down the ladder:
Falling for Roy
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Posted: August 11, 2003 10:34 PM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2003 10:34 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.939517 Overall Rank: 1402 Comments:
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Settle @ 67.75.22.253
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20-Aug-03/6:15 AM
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the opening organ part of Roxy Music's "Editions of You" is stolen from "Brown Sugar"
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Crakyamuni @ 12.83.76.4
> Settle
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20-Aug-03/4:09 PM
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Are you accusing me of ?!!
I like this poem very much. It has emotion, fluid verse, and sort of...kind of reminds me of when I scratch a chaulk board for fun.
Charming.
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