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? (Free verse) by Crakyamuni

Managing to destroy eloquence like love humor me I don't know you now, youre flesh to me lies are forever despondent ambiguous tense gnashing full of tremor I'll pretend not to notice this is forever.

J.B. Manning 20-Aug-03/11:53 AM
I like this poem very much. It has emotion, fluid verse, and sort of...kind of reminds me of when I scratch a chaulk board for fun.




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