| Re: Dance With Me by marvelis |
26-Aug-03/3:58 PM |
Yeah, there's some pretty interesting fairy tale porn stars they might want to marry.
No man dreams of a snotty princess bitch who orders them around, Jesus!
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| Re: Piano Guitar Passion by Don-Quixote |
25-Aug-03/10:24 AM |
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Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! Bad metaphors, AUGH!!!!!!!
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| Re: What Do You Want From Me? by Bonehiss |
22-Aug-03/11:06 AM |
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| Re: a comment on D.I.Y.M Syndrome by Rilke4ClosetLesbians |
22-Aug-03/10:59 AM |
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Maybe I should go down on YOU! Muahahahahahah!
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| Re: Balances (sorry for all caps) by zarathustra |
22-Aug-03/12:44 AM |
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Love the "sidewalk go dalmation." I like this poem, good imagery (not too pushy). Nice, 7
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| Re: A Surgeons Butchery by SupremeDreamer |
22-Aug-03/12:42 AM |
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"Slices Lesions" is kinda weak...I think a lesion is a surface abrasion, not a cut, so to speak. Not positive onthat, though.
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| Re: a comment on Waves (2) by Rilke4ClosetLesbians |
22-Aug-03/12:39 AM |
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Because of this comment, I wrote a new poem...
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| Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
21-Aug-03/11:01 PM |
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A little too much Pink Floyd.....
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| Re: stop poking me georges seurat by coolassbob |
21-Aug-03/3:49 PM |
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Uhhh...I think if he read this, he'd laugh in your puffy-eyed face! Nonetheless, this takes neurotic to another level. 6.
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| Re: Totally Hair by TanHand |
21-Aug-03/3:46 PM |
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I believe the term was "perfect"
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| Re: walk out by NNirvana13666 |
21-Aug-03/3:36 PM |
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"Enter my world of unstructured poetry"
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| Re: Clay Man by eliastemplar |
19-Aug-03/2:55 PM |
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