I like this one~I'm adding it to my fave list

Preety good, but rather short

What the hell is your problem? Gays are not the only ones to get aids!!

Wish I could have met your Gran...she sounds great.
I'll assume "the father" that you share is "God/Jesus"

sorry to disappoint you but I'm still here. That and what kind of word is buggering?

Guess this is one of your better poems. But don't ya have anything cheerful to say?

old chairs get scratched up,glued together or whatever
then keep getting repainted to look nice. But under all that pretty presentable paint it's still the same old chair. and whats wrong with the chair showing all its original charm...as long as the legs (foundation of the chair) is still strong enough to hold it up and serve its purpose?

yeah, ya lost it on the last line. Ya started out
good though.

All 4 of my sons are wonderful. The oldest is 21 and has been in IRAQ since March, the youngest is 10.
They have done & will do things that I don't agree with just as I have done things that they don't agree with, bu I have never called them "self-obsessed Neo-Nazis"

Thanx: my 21 year old son is in Iraq

I'm not really a religious person, but love this poem....I'm saving this one.

I have a friend who is really into all that Karma stuff, but personally I'm not into karma or life after death or anything like that. Just wanted to say that your poem flowed pretty good tho.

this is pretty good..unfortunately once you give anything away....it's gone