Re: incidentally, all royalties to the estate of WCW by lilli	9-Jul-02/11:21 AM
I don't get it, but it seems like it would be nice if I did...
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/11:22 AM
flip-flops? barefoot? clogs? :)
Re: Office Worker angst by Adriaan	9-Jul-02/11:23 AM
well put. very terse, but somehow still pleasant.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/11:33 AM
simple, almost evocative... hits a good tone, but... where does it go? mexico, I suppose... eh?
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/11:34 AM
this is well done and hilarious!
Re: i've got this song stuck in my head by silvertongueddevil	9-Jul-02/11:35 AM
I like the flow to this. :) just before the end it peters out a bit, but I like the punchline. :)
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/11:36 AM
a good point, but... I thought dodos were funny in part BECAUSE they couldn't fly? :) poem really doesn't do much for me. ah well.
Re: The Kipps by lilli	9-Jul-02/11:38 AM
weird. I think I have to check out some Austin Clarke. I almost like this...
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/11:39 AM
whoah. trippy weirdness. :)
Re: To Mother by lynnstratton	9-Jul-02/3:15 PM
very beautiful, though I'm no theist.
Re: If We Lived by ZCatcher	9-Jul-02/4:23 PM
very cute and very sweet. cool. :)
Re: Digital Remembery by ifni	9-Jul-02/4:24 PM
hmm. ones and zeros are sort of the opposite of quantum, so far as I understand things. quantum is beyond fuzzy. beyond that, though, this is rather nice. :)
Re: Orange by lindseyis	9-Jul-02/5:58 PM
very cute. reminds me of an exercise in berkeley's lower division poetry course. :)
Re: A Sonnet for Barbara by PatColvin	9-Jul-02/7:34 PM
a nice sentiment, but I couldn't get into the cadence of the poem and didn't really find anything to take out of it/remember from it.
Re: 1 of 2,543 things she does that starts fires in your grassland heart. by mogwai	9-Jul-02/7:35 PM
significantly amusing, but it looks like prose to me.
Re: guilty mind by Angel_of_fait	9-Jul-02/7:36 PM
barrie == bury? why the use of "u" for "you" half of the time?
Re: Angel Cager by OneFingerAnswer	9-Jul-02/7:38 PM
a nice sentiment, but I couldn't get into it as a poem/song. the rhythm/cadence felt awkward, and it didn't really move me in any manner.
Re: art by feelinglistless	9-Jul-02/7:40 PM
nice -- this seems just an awkward shyness from really amazing. the grocery list works, overall, but needs something more than the title to tie it together... some sort of rhythm, or... dunno. but cool. :)
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/7:41 PM
I still love this. :)
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/9:02 PM
the problem was that folks were flooding the site with every poem they've written in their 60-odd years or whatnot. With even one user adding 70 poems in a week, it was a bit absurd -- add on the fact that there's usually a couple of new users a week and in general people simple post all their poetry and disappear... and add on to THAT the fact that this site gets slammed occasionally (50 new users over the last two days, and counting, thanks to yahoo...) what's wrong with picking what you consider to be your best-so-far? and slowly adding on to that? responding to: ------------- No more than 3 poems a week? It's not like I just started writing for this site. I have quite a few poems and I wanted to put up a few more but I can't because of this restriction. I know the rule isn't just against me but I still don't like it.