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Office Worker angst

by Adriaan

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 3 comments

I think back There is a hole where a day should have been A blank vagueness Could I have done so little? With so much time Or so it seems When I look back I worry that life like the days will one day be a blank vagueness I hope that I will ask instead could I have done so much with so little

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3 comments

[7] nentwined 9-Jul-02/11:23 AM Reply
well put. very terse, but somehow still pleasant.
[6] Red_is_life 16-Jul-02/2:11 AM Reply
A little rigid but very true captures the subject well.
[8] Scarlett 24-Mar-06/5:04 PM Reply
Terse fits because it's a feeling that time has been lost, where did it go, how could it be wasted.... Daily hum drum of life and will you look back with regrets. Enjoyed this.