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Office Worker angst (Free verse) by Adriaan I think back
There is a hole
where a day should have been
A blank vagueness
Could I have done so little?
With so much time
Or so it seems
When I look back
I worry that life
like the days
will one day be
a blank vagueness
I hope that
I will ask instead
could I have done so much
with so little
Up the ladder:
Glassblowers
Down the ladder:
Because The Ground Is Still Frozen
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Posted: May 10, 2002 5:09 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 5:09 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.880797 Overall Rank: 1530 Comments:
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nentwined @ 66.92.183.34
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9-Jul-02/11:23 AM
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well put. very terse, but somehow still pleasant.
A little rigid but very true captures the subject well.
Terse fits because it's a feeling that time has been lost, where did it go, how could it be wasted.... Daily hum drum of life and will you look back with regrets. Enjoyed this.
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