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Office Worker angst (Free verse) by Adriaan

I think back There is a hole where a day should have been A blank vagueness Could I have done so little? With so much time Or so it seems When I look back I worry that life like the days will one day be a blank vagueness I hope that I will ask instead could I have done so much with so little

Red_is_life 16-Jul-02/2:11 AM
A little rigid but very true captures the subject well.




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