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Office Worker angst (Free verse) by Adriaan

I think back There is a hole where a day should have been A blank vagueness Could I have done so little? With so much time Or so it seems When I look back I worry that life like the days will one day be a blank vagueness I hope that I will ask instead could I have done so much with so little

Scarlett 24-Mar-06/5:04 PM
Terse fits because it's a feeling that time has been lost, where did it go, how could it be wasted.... Daily hum drum of life and will you look back with regrets. Enjoyed this.




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