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Orange (Free verse) by lindseyis
Orange, you in your nippled,
naveled flesh. I notice you roll
just a quarter turn to the left never
sitting still straight-faced and fresh.
You said this conversation's over
before I even sat down. So I stood,
peeling away at your latent discontent.
I know you. I know you, you Floridian
with that slick, silent skin wrapped around
your succulent flesh. Let me swallow
your seeds, let me nibble your nectar.
As I promise not to spit, a word of you out.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.285714
Weighted score: 5.2088737
Overall Rank: 4430
Posted: July 9, 2002 1:48 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 1:48 PM PDT
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