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sonnet (Other) by hoopoe
It's several years since I last wrote a sonnet And now I see I'm writing one again, Doubt intervenes, and where I would be plain, Ideas disperse. I need a rhyming-bonnet - Not "thinking-cap" - a pretty clumsy pun, it May seem to you, who do not bear this strain, This song, heart forced through cities in my brain, Seeking its end only since I've begun it. My urge to meet my challenge brings a birth, Something of me issues towards you other. Don't be too quick to calculate its worth; It may be small, I am no less a mother. And you have seen, in reading this you lknow it, The undrugged labour of a female poet.

Up the ladder: autumn gold
Down the ladder: Orange

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.285714
Weighted score: 5.2088737
Overall Rank: 4429
Posted: May 19, 2002 11:25 AM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2002 11:25 AM PDT
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[8] mikejedw @ 66.47.86.4 | 20-May-02/8:45 AM | Reply
Ohhh, I know this feeling. There's something about formal poetry that propels us through the writing of a poem, a birth-like struggle. This is a very funny piece of ars poetica, particularly the abundance (and alternation) of feminine rhymes from a "female poet".
[8] deleted user @ 206.180.235.33 | 26-Jun-02/1:58 AM | Reply
Normally I despise self-referential poetry, but the rhymes and language in this one are very clever.
[10] mindsigns @ 63.100.108.19 | 5-Mar-04/2:40 AM | Reply
Funny and original
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