| Re: Aluminum Shackles - Titanium Quills by SupremeDreamer |
4-Oct-03/8:51 AM |
Long debate.. and darky, heres some deleting!
im sure you can post the soon to be MIA comments for all to behold.
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| Re: a comment on Aluminum Shackles - Titanium Quills by SupremeDreamer |
4-Oct-03/8:01 AM |
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can i dream it to happen darkie? :)
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| Re: a comment on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Oct-03/7:17 AM |
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sun explosions.. i predict white blindness to take place of my ebony shades.
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| Re: Often, I'll sit down to pee by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Oct-03/6:52 AM |
does she have pony tails and a mini-skirt?
8.
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| Re: a comment on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Oct-03/6:42 AM |
my earwax tootsie roll makes a nice candle
but its windy..
i had illumination for a few miliseconds though
and managed to find my comfy tree hole
now im trying to conquer night
its dark is all i can say.
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| Re: a comment on ocd by FreeFormFixation |
4-Oct-03/6:01 AM |
I have a lifetime supply of Acutene.
but its funny to watch you write with that drippy mud mask. ;)
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| Re: a comment on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Oct-03/5:54 AM |
ah, the witch doctors
the black magician are loose
and busy pushing for the pending improvements
that you speak of.
and im doing my owl song.
-wink-
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| Re: a comment on Some follow marchers- others take time to understand it. by SupremeDreamer |
4-Oct-03/5:49 AM |
the overflowing pot drowned my cooking fire
and the the weather emptied its bladder
then i had to kill squirrels with rocks
now i have discovered that i have no matches
-nod- my time to wait
and dance for lightning.
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| Re: a comment on Some follow marchers- others take time to understand it. by SupremeDreamer |
4-Oct-03/5:46 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Aluminum Shackles - Titanium Quills by SupremeDreamer |
4-Oct-03/5:42 AM |
fixed. and, its a good thing that there are more than just my two eyes scanning those lines..
get me better glasses for christmas
and kill the lenscrafter punk slowly
would you?
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| Re: Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Oct-03/3:23 AM |
aye, i made the list..
and ive only just gotten out my slump
pleasantly surprised.
but i liked the intro much more, i like nodding profusely. the list rocks, and i there arent many that could replace you as judge.
anyway, enough yammering- i have to catch the next updraft and fly again (i didnt get these damned wings for nothing)
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| Re: a comment on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
4-Oct-03/3:05 AM |
holy crap.. can i hire you as a laywer?
is there a fee, or do you work pro bono?
is your dayjob something that has to do with law? (im guessing yes)
ive copy pasted this and stuck it in my "legal insurance folder"
its good to have readily available shields.
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| Re: Aluminum Shackles - Titanium Quills by SupremeDreamer |
4-Oct-03/2:56 AM |
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oh my.. im really fired up.. notepad shall be sore before the day is done..
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| Re: a comment on Before My Mother's Thighs (A free purse) by Spanish Devil by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
3-Oct-03/11:34 PM |
meth, thinking, touching up some recent pieces of mine that i started writing.
oh, and dreaming season has arrived- my insomnia is in effect even without chemical assitance.. yes, its mask spinning time and fire lust along with my life replayed and considered.
hello to your mother, and:
cheers!
i robbed my Sandeman porto stash
(it wont help me sleep, but it eases the stress level involved)
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| Re: Before My Mother's Thighs (A free purse) by Spanish Devil by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
3-Oct-03/11:19 PM |
your certainly on a mission, thats for sure.
hows your night?
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| Re: The Swallower (Oh brother!) by Spanish Devil by Bachus |
3-Oct-03/11:09 PM |
ah horus, i fear i might be getting a tad soft
but, thankfully your always at attention with parody musicals..hrmm, there must always be carnivores to do vegan population controll, or a bell man with the most painful copper echos.
does my "im being gentle" mask suit me? or do i need to get more goddamn plaster and better molds?
as usual, your satire is a well crafted stand up session- 10.
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| Re: a comment on An Angel from Venice Disappears by DreamerSupreme |
3-Oct-03/10:32 PM |
my best friends and even my most annoying and diabolical enemies offer opportunity for constructive learning.
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| Re: a comment on An Angel from Venice Disappears by DreamerSupreme |
3-Oct-03/10:28 PM |
Are you some mechanical bot that has some specially programmed ai used to pick writings of a certain nature and then comment with the default response setting?
im not sure how -original- this is.. but ok.
-note to self: why is p&k suddenly commenting on my stuff? -shrug- oh well, i needed something out of the ordinary these days..--
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| Re: a comment on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
3-Oct-03/4:46 PM |
italy, sometimes poetry does include the offensive, anti-PC, and outright disturbing writes, i wouldnt be so narrow minded.
youll find that many good poets carry some "poetry crafted to offend, shock, and anger the masses"
then again, -shrug-. but its wise to not discard anything too quickly- i learned this the hard way. :)
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| Re: a comment on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
3-Oct-03/4:42 PM |
the ... dampened the line i think, but nice.. but this made me chuckle with delight the most:
in the corner as I cry holding my red cock
to the sky in sorrow as she slips
and fades away upon his HUGE UNCUT MAMBA
"huge uncut mamba" - perfect unveiling of the mans mental gears in action, lmao.
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