poemranker ::20 most recent comments by SupremeDreamer (761-780) and replies

Comments bySupremeDreamer, 761–780 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

Long debate.. and darky, heres some deleting!

im sure you can post the soon to be MIA comments for all to behold.
replying on Aluminum Shackles - Titanium Quills by SupremeDreamer 4 Oct 2003, 8:01 AM
can i dream it to happen darkie? :)
sun explosions.. i predict white blindness to take place of my ebony shades.
does she have pony tails and a mini-skirt?

8.
my earwax tootsie roll makes a nice candle
but its windy..

i had illumination for a few miliseconds though
and managed to find my comfy tree hole

now im trying to conquer night
its dark is all i can say.
replying on ocd by FreeFormFixation 4 Oct 2003, 6:01 AM
I have a lifetime supply of Acutene.

but its funny to watch you write with that drippy mud mask. ;)
ah, the witch doctors
the black magician are loose
and busy pushing for the pending improvements
that you speak of.

and im doing my owl song.
-wink-
the overflowing pot drowned my cooking fire
and the the weather emptied its bladder
then i had to kill squirrels with rocks
now i have discovered that i have no matches

-nod- my time to wait
and dance for lightning.
I-I cap'

replying on Aluminum Shackles - Titanium Quills by SupremeDreamer 4 Oct 2003, 5:42 AM
fixed. and, its a good thing that there are more than just my two eyes scanning those lines..

get me better glasses for christmas
and kill the lenscrafter punk slowly
would you?
aye, i made the list..

and ive only just gotten out my slump

pleasantly surprised.

but i liked the intro much more, i like nodding profusely. the list rocks, and i there arent many that could replace you as judge.

anyway, enough yammering- i have to catch the next updraft and fly again (i didnt get these damned wings for nothing)
replying on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}> 4 Oct 2003, 3:05 AM
holy crap.. can i hire you as a laywer?

is there a fee, or do you work pro bono?

is your dayjob something that has to do with law? (im guessing yes)

ive copy pasted this and stuck it in my "legal insurance folder"

its good to have readily available shields.

oh my.. im really fired up.. notepad shall be sore before the day is done..
meth, thinking, touching up some recent pieces of mine that i started writing.

oh, and dreaming season has arrived- my insomnia is in effect even without chemical assitance.. yes, its mask spinning time and fire lust along with my life replayed and considered.

hello to your mother, and:

cheers!

i robbed my Sandeman porto stash
(it wont help me sleep, but it eases the stress level involved)
your certainly on a mission, thats for sure.
hows your night?
ah horus, i fear i might be getting a tad soft

but, thankfully your always at attention with parody musicals..hrmm, there must always be carnivores to do vegan population controll, or a bell man with the most painful copper echos.

does my "im being gentle" mask suit me? or do i need to get more goddamn plaster and better molds?

as usual, your satire is a well crafted stand up session- 10.
replying on An Angel from Venice Disappears by DreamerSupreme 3 Oct 2003, 10:32 PM
my best friends and even my most annoying and diabolical enemies offer opportunity for constructive learning.

replying on An Angel from Venice Disappears by DreamerSupreme 3 Oct 2003, 10:28 PM
Are you some mechanical bot that has some specially programmed ai used to pick writings of a certain nature and then comment with the default response setting?

im not sure how -original- this is.. but ok.

-note to self: why is p&k suddenly commenting on my stuff? -shrug- oh well, i needed something out of the ordinary these days..--
replying on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}> 3 Oct 2003, 4:46 PM
italy, sometimes poetry does include the offensive, anti-PC, and outright disturbing writes, i wouldnt be so narrow minded.

youll find that many good poets carry some "poetry crafted to offend, shock, and anger the masses"

then again, -shrug-. but its wise to not discard anything too quickly- i learned this the hard way. :)
replying on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}> 3 Oct 2003, 4:42 PM
the ... dampened the line i think, but nice.. but this made me chuckle with delight the most:

in the corner as I cry holding my red cock
to the sky in sorrow as she slips
and fades away upon his HUGE UNCUT MAMBA

"huge uncut mamba" - perfect unveiling of the mans mental gears in action, lmao.