| Re: Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
3-Oct-03/4:13 PM |
-how a young man is lead to neo-nazism and the kkk...
jealousy and cock size can produce some interesting and unpleasant results.. heh. 8.
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| Re: a comment on Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus |
3-Oct-03/4:09 PM |
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talent is one thing- what a poets pen hand is inspired to create is another?
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| Re: a comment on Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus |
3-Oct-03/4:08 PM |
joe, just something to consider:
isnt truth or falsity simply dependent on ones point of view
and how they experience life and the world around them?
etc:
is everything at face value the relfection of the poet, or an expression of whats around him?
hrmm?
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| Re: a comment on Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus |
3-Oct-03/4:04 PM |
Opera singer? i thought you just had a small experimental folk/rolk band (wonderfull music). Never knew this included the opera.
ah well.
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| Re: a comment on Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus |
3-Oct-03/4:02 PM |
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oh shush- you produce crap, so you wouldnt know quality if you snorted it straight up your nasal canals.
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| Re: a comment on Trapped Rat by SupremeDreamer |
3-Oct-03/3:59 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Trapped Rat by SupremeDreamer |
3-Oct-03/3:57 PM |
Ah, italy-angel, glad you enjoyed it, ill probly be posting it soon on entrances and exits for them folks to nitpick at will.
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| Re: a comment on Trapped Rat by SupremeDreamer |
3-Oct-03/3:55 PM |
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happy you liked it joe, i had this one stashed in my workshop for awhile and added the final touches yesterday.
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| Re: I am Jack's Black magic, dude. by Shardik |
30-Sep-03/10:11 PM |
wonderfull stuff- your life is interesting indeed.
9.
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| Re: A decade and five years of thought. by baphomet |
29-Sep-03/2:03 AM |
skull fucking fantastic
wish i had bigger wings.
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| Re: A spectacular poem by a handsome man by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
28-Sep-03/1:09 AM |
amen. and heres a 10.
hang the song bird
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| Re: Last attempt at "My Father's Dreams" by Joe-joe |
28-Sep-03/12:58 AM |
good cutting joe, whats that phrase? "i told you so"
and heres a well deserved eight.
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| Re: a comment on this is your poetry by nentwined |
23-Sep-03/1:23 AM |
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just opinionated - better impact i think, because id be thinking why my poetry would be smelly undergarments instead of wondering why you told me to think upon these ponderances as if your poem was so important. :P
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| Re: a comment on this is your poetry by nentwined |
22-Sep-03/10:36 PM |
last stanza should have been cut out.
:P
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| Re: In the Cold Waste by razorgrin |
22-Sep-03/8:10 PM |
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| Re: a comment on In the Cold Waste by razorgrin |
22-Sep-03/8:09 PM |
not like im one with much taste for haiku, but you shouldnt yammer about anything.. your work isnt great, funny, or anything:
its pseudo-teenage whining. so shut up.
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| Re: Last attempt at "My Father's Dreams" by Joe-joe |
22-Sep-03/8:06 PM |
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whisper: joe.. you could cut it by half and actually make it a bomb.
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| Re: this is your poetry by nentwined |
22-Sep-03/6:54 PM |
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masterpiece!!!! 10!!!! WISE BUDDAH SPEAKS!!!
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| Re: Yoko and Sakura Make Love by William Delacroix |
22-Sep-03/6:51 PM |
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whats this? the perversion of hidden dragon scenes?
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| Re: a comment on Madam Z - [<~>] - Snake Pen & Holy Grail by SupremeDreamer |
22-Sep-03/6:47 PM |
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well, shes part of the ringling brothers now! YEEHAAAW
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