Re: Cold by horus8	29-Apr-04/4:10 PM
Over all.. its different. I mean to say that its apart from your usual style of penning; its a good read never-the-less. Blessed with eight.
Re: a comment on Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw	29-Apr-04/4:00 PM
Supple breasts being the mild start of gender morphing and drag queen anthesis?
Re: Pisan pizza by Y2KSlamPoet	29-Apr-04/3:39 PM
Wonder why you'd post this under a fake look-alike of one of my pen-names... -shrug- I had assumed that such tricksy impostures are done in order to ridicule.. but whatever- aside from that, I likes it, I smokes it, I crave constant injections of it while waiting for perpetual IV drips. Blessed with nine.
Re: Cunt by Jeremi B. Handrinos	29-Apr-04/3:18 PM
The many wonders, sensations, and assorted smells of the almighty twat & its effect 'pon slithering snakes make for good readin anyday- really liked this stanza: "My spent seed gumming up a future in you Worshipped, your insight smells of old blood." If I'm not mistaken, couldn't this be labeled a ghazal? Anyway, blessed with nine.
Re: The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Apr-04/2:45 PM
This poem is below your over-all writing ability, lil-furry-poofball.. did you regress? Cmon man, would you add some spice and atleast get the tip of my toes to fuckin sizzle?
Re: a comment on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer	29-Apr-04/2:02 PM
Degrading women wasn't my goal or over-all intention with this piece, so injecting more misogynism would morph the poem from "apathetic view on day to day life & being irritated with the mostly insipid nature of basic human activity" into: "women are just dirty cock teasers and greedy, jealous, power-hungry imperialists sucking the life out of men and other women, etc, etc." To sum this up, I'm just not really interested in degrading or bashing women and going gung-ho anti-feminism or something- its not a question of being PC either, I'm just content not over-generalizing women; they come in many colors, ugly and pretty, like everything else. Plus anyway, that sort of thing has been done a billion ways from sunday in an array of cultural overtones- its boring, and too fucking easy, but if thats what tickles your toes, then perhaps you should take a go at it.
Re: a comment on The bearded space merchant from lil Idaho by Don-Quixote	28-Apr-04/5:56 AM
You have perfectly pulled off the genuine humor-less robotic reply. Have you not even considered the possibility of mixing sex toys with traffic control? You have instilled fear deep into my jester soul... I'll suffer the trauma for the rest of my life now.
Re: The Air That Escapes His Lungs. by cleverdevice	28-Apr-04/5:52 AM
It makes me feel as if I'm attending a new age funeral proceeding conducted by an unknown militant cult- but thats not bad, mostly I liked it, but its well.. slightly more stiff than a catholic sermon, to me anyway. Blessed with eight.
Re: a comment on The bearded space merchant from lil Idaho by Don-Quixote	28-Apr-04/5:46 AM
How about we forget the light and substitute it with a very large red dildo? that will get people to stop and take a look.. leave a corpse by it and its sure to work perfectly.
Re: a comment on The bearded space merchant from lil Idaho by Don-Quixote	28-Apr-04/5:41 AM
You know some folks would actually sit here and wonder if theres a deeper meaning/message hidden within this erotic snippet.. but I have no such urge. But I am compelled to cackle in pubescent amusement, while asking myself if the cigar was fully lit when the NEGRO shafted LOUISA with it- just one of many such silly questions that I can not keep from poping to mind.
Re: a comment on The bearded space merchant from lil Idaho by Don-Quixote	28-Apr-04/5:33 AM
Its actually based on a real crazy old vietnam vet, who would wander the park or remain on bus benches- the sort who enjoyed anyones company and really wanted to buy you all the beer and smokes you want (provided that you have the money of course!) It was pretty funny to be drunk and watching him attempt to make the empty cans disappear, his failure evoking a face full of bewilderment emphasised by his wrinkles- he'd never stop believing in his star power.. lmao.
Re: a comment on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer	27-Apr-04/8:25 PM
Shut up you fool, can't you see that I'm trying to enslave the fucking planet??
Re: a comment on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer	27-Apr-04/4:57 PM
I'm right? wonderful! lets celebrate with champaign and coffee with whisky!
Re: Detroit by <{Baba^Yaga}>	27-Apr-04/2:35 PM
Enjoyable read, though some of the wording seemed slightly irregular to me here and there- probably just me. Blessed with nine.
Re: a comment on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer	27-Apr-04/2:16 PM
I stick internal rhyme in my writing without even thinking about it anymore.. guess its one of the good side effects of writing a whole lot. Can I ask you something? does the piece come off as really misogynist? Does the weed bother you? Think I should instead replace the cannabis with Prozac?
Re: a comment on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer	27-Apr-04/2:12 PM
oblivion becomes me is now cut and buried in my boneyard of failed verse. As for misogynism, where exactly in the poem do I attack women in general? its just my way of comparing teasing strippers to the rise & setting of the sun- its the sort of thing that pops up in my mind.. I didn't intend to attack women in general at all. Plus the poem is me comparing life to a striptease.. I don't think theres any way to avoid being offensive twards women in this piece, but if you have some amazing way to make everyone happy, please show me.. but frankly, thats impossible- its also not a goal listed in my agendum. As for the pot? I don't care about the response that gets me.. maybe I should mention valium or extra strength xanax? cmon now.
Re: a comment on A wicked rose grows in God's grapevine. by SupremeDreamer	1-Apr-04/3:44 PM
The joke? or that you don't give a shit? Nah, I don't get it, and I'm not trying to. Maybe you should forgo the quiz and get on with what you seem to earnestly hint at, and just reveal the little factor that eludes me in my oblivion. My "earnest" attack isn't anthing but empty blithering defense typed out so as to not pass the time in idle dawdling.
Re: a comment on I Married an Infectious Woman (My Love, 'Futility') by SupremeDreamer	1-Apr-04/3:07 PM
You've just handed down unto my drafty dome a divine prophesy, which is to my disillusioned eyes as cataclysmic, if not even more so, than the Book of Revelations. But as for basing my career on RM's poetical trasmission of voting warts of "10"? Means my "career" was without some sort of base before his invansion of poemranker with his despicable dirt-encrusted clicker brigade... But we both know that I was just as arrogant and ego-bloated before the coming of the Rockmage, in the days then my scores were in the dismal mudpit. And RM isn't the one who has drowned my posted pieces with votes that drastically affected my scores- CLS was the one who was the last to shower me with a flood of tens as a idiotic cop-out when I revealed her hypocritical/illogical and random barrages of zeros on one or two particular pennames of mine, and only tens given to the other aliases of mine. So she changed her votes to tens in order to appease me, which only deepened my disgust and frustration, utimately leading me to discontinue the barrage, then dismiss the hope of some explaination of her actions. My voting score/average was first built with the scars of past zeroing and various discriminative votes, and then only a few months ago endured spastic zeros and genial tens from two main clicker empowered forces and various lone vigilante(s). The mind-less character of voting caused me to look 'pon my score/average as irrelevant and unrelated over-all to my actual writing quality in a little over a mere month & 1/2 after having joined the ranker. I like to think my career is based on the comments recieved in response by all, even yours, and how I drove myself onwards with my bulging pimples of confidence and zany hyperboles, intermixed with regular acts of idiocy or intentional mindless-ness. As for my need of your cold rough hands to offer a brutal public fisting? Thats mostly a masochistic need that also offers a reason to declare war and busy myself with in endless amounts of arguement and babble; it fills the idle hours when I'm not otherwise motivated to pen s'more poems, prose etc. or formal turd-defacement of others. But your comment is one of many which could be joined together in a one combined account of my comic saga, entitled "Rigor-Pen'd Quarrels & Tribulations of a Farcical, Dim Trifler." _end rant transmission_
Re: a comment on A wicked rose grows in God's grapevine. by SupremeDreamer	1-Apr-04/12:38 PM
Bless you.. this attack on my piece relieves my desperate, depraved addiction for your brand of ranker spanking- its saltwater and arsenic injected straight into my jugular. But on to the dance which follows: In short, literal interpetation aside, I essentially said he can not know of all the sins a person commits daily unless he defines god as able to do so- AND THEN ALSO give him the power to know of all the "bad" things they do/think/unknowingly conspires to do, whether he wishes it or not. And as for god manifesting light after creating heaven on earth in the dark: How could he make light without some divine sense of "sight"? Even he would have to create a means to tell the difference between darkness and light to create them with the attributes that he had in mind in for them in his holy & sacred plans for the creation of Existence. If not, theres a good possibility god flipped on the light-switch to discover in supreme ironic chagrin that he didn't make earth a perfect sphere, but instead round with slight impressions/lumps dotting the surface! But since a deity of his perfection and power isn't able to make mistakes, he realizes that mountains are also a part of his plan!His extreme perfection caused him to manifest them without the need to be aware of it. Maybe thats why he is said to know of whats in store for everything and everyones destiny before it actually occurs... And why would Jesu have just those specific abilities, since in theory (in the sense that he is equal to a deity) able to manifest any ability that his divine imagination comes up with? It all seems silly. Plus the destinctions aren't a real factor since I'm attacking theism in general (transendent, all-powerfull being who created man and set forth sacred rules he must abide, etc. Every form of theism applying their own lil details is irrelevant, because all such religions are built with the same core attributes that define religious theism.) That is all- My feet have stopped their tapidy-tap-tap and have become still once again. I do hope you give me another brutal & potent fix soon in reply.
Re: a comment on I Married an Infectious Woman (My Love, 'Futility') by SupremeDreamer	31-Mar-04/8:50 PM
Trying to understand DA is like trying to produce pure white pieces of shit from your arse. But hey, its doesn't hurt to try! But I wonder about the state of your health.. because 90% of his comments is.. well thats A LOT OF COMMENTS specially if you read the replies/insults/arguements that follow. You actually digesting that much material leads me to conclude that you have an odd obsession of the extreme sort... but everyone has their "thing". :)