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Detroit (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
Counting the mile roads back
downtown from Big Beaver (16 mile rd.)
To McNichols (5 mile rd.) was a daily
habit. Pawning gold, and selling hand
guns to stranger hands than the
two we were given to demand
more of ourselves -- but the cold
was too old, timeless, patient,
observant and beyond our measure.
Squatting in those dark poisoned
buildings with their broken window
mouths, and sharp cloudy cracked
teeth. I often would convince myself
that if I stayed still enough I might
freeze. Out in the night I would
count the sounds to nod off:
A hooker's high heels
The pimp's smoky whistle
A fan belt's stinky screech
The empty pocket reach.
Gutter Stamen to
Skyscraper pistils.
The higher the mile road
The bigger the house and yard
Blind pigs, and vitamin C cut
drugs and thugs in run down
Mansions with stanchions and
Doric columns full of working
girl's pensions... This city has
a carburetor heart on full choke.
And a pitbull's kiss full on
the face of its children.
The Hamtramck Axle factory blues
Cass Corridor switch blade shoes
And two roads that start together
Only to disappear beyond the lights
unparalleled from the Renaissance center.
Woodward Blvd and Gratiot Avenue
Cars dragging the strip, some old, but
most new. Across the river is Windsor
Another side to the same view.
A leaky tunnel, and a bridge away -
- from Canada.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.666667
Weighted score: 6.8333335
Overall Rank: 339
Posted: April 27, 2004 11:25 AM PDT; Last modified: April 27, 2004 11:25 AM PDT
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