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Cold (Free verse) by horus8
Pounded thin through splitting blue light
Shafts refract and condense me in crystal.
Electrolytes and long inescapable pauses
direct me from line to line, sight to sight.
Layer upon layer of frozen idea and tissue...
If I were to bend but an inch, this would be over.
Another mad dream in another false flash
Like young love under exploding glacier.
Floe to floe, following the North star home
Back to a place where no sun finds night.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 6.8276463
Overall Rank: 363
Posted: April 29, 2004 12:03 AM PDT; Last modified: April 29, 2004 12:20 PM PDT
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