Re: Ein Kampf by Sasha	22-Apr-07/5:38 PM
You need a better, more original approach to this. That and.. oh yeah, the nazi/holocaust poem is over done to the extreme. Another thing: Unless you actually lived and endured that rather grim period as a Jew in Germany, I find all artistic expression dressed thus to be abortive. Horridly fruitless rather...
Re: Easter (edited) by thetrev	22-Apr-07/5:28 PM
morassed-- Were you trying to turn a noun into an adjective? Webster didn't provide a listing, other than for "morass", if that was what you meant. That, or Webster sucks ass. That aside, I enjoyed it. Nine.
Re: a comment on Unsung American Dream by SupremeDreamer	22-Apr-07/5:21 PM
Indeed. By the way, do you happen to carry golden floss? I need to edge clean the crack of my ass.
Re: a comment on Fuck Shelters, & fuck OutReach Court. by SupremeDreamer	26-Feb-07/3:00 PM
Bow'ls, sir, bowl's. Btw, all those are words, they simply make use of hyphenations. :)
Re: looking for by Phalkon	23-Feb-07/3:51 PM
Four.
Re: Polite refusal by Stephen Robins	19-Feb-07/6:11 PM
I'm going to print this out and burn it outside the steps of the college I end up attending after my pilgrimage through the wastelands of american existence. That aside, have a ten, you cad.
Re: Here are the wipes by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	19-Feb-07/6:01 PM
Topnotch sir.
Re: Plurals by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	19-Feb-07/6:00 PM
wtf?
Re: Why I’m Homeless by Dovina	19-Feb-07/5:55 PM
What image are you going for? Where is the image? That's all.
Re: a comment on Edna's Christmas Farewell by Edna Sweetlove	19-Feb-07/5:53 PM
Yeah, now we're talkin.
Re: a comment on Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer	19-Feb-07/5:36 PM
Politics, yes, yes, whatever must be done. How about Neo- assignments? So I could claim it to be a neo-limerick.
Re: a comment on OI! The Brown Flame by SupremeDreamer	19-Feb-07/5:33 PM
'Twas the point you twat. Atleast I don't vote for meself, missy.
Re: a comment on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	12-Feb-07/1:53 PM
Or to compel you to vigorously thrash me. I've really missed you DA, my faithful private investigator.
Re: a comment on self-suffocation by Phalkon	12-Feb-07/1:50 PM
PS- I have never told anyone that they'll never be as good as me. I in no way make claim to be a poet worthy of others aspiring to write "as I do", and never I claimed or happened to have always written top-notch stuff. But I do claim to be engaged in a continued effort to improve and stengthen my abilities, in the hopes of becoming a writer of a "professional" and skilled sort. You happen to be displacing your own thoughts as mine, when it's actually your insecurity forming dejected conclusions within your subconcious. [In other words, stop putting words in my mouth. It's much more effective to quote the things I actually do say, rather than coming up with your own reinterpretations.]
Re: a comment on self-suffocation by Phalkon	12-Feb-07/1:34 PM
I never said at any point that "You would never be as good a writer as I am.", you fucking dolt. I simply said that this recent post of yours, and most likely the previous ones, suck ass and lack any real effort and/or forethought. Like I said before, and try actually reading what I'm saying: You can sit there and be a lowly crustacean in the throes of your embrowning, resigned to the foul poopdeck of RankerVille... OR You can start actually attempting to write something with skill and consideration, rather than spewing emotionally crippled, teenaged puke, and embarrassing yourself. Who knows, maybe if you actually tried to write better, you'd be better than me. Except that the attitude & stupidity you're emanating tends to give one the impression that, you don't posses the spine or determination to do anything well; it seems that you'd rather settle for mediocre dribble. Pity, isn't it?
Re: a comment on Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer	12-Feb-07/1:10 PM
You've evolved to using two word phrases to explain your reasoning. There's hope for you yet, perhaps. Just curious, what's the other half of your genetic make-up? Fascist perhaps?
Re: a comment on Fuck Shelters, & fuck OutReach Court. by SupremeDreamer	12-Feb-07/1:02 PM
Are you a modifed clone of Rockmage, designed to fit his previouse zero bombing behaviour towards me in the past? Is there a particular reason for the seemingly indiscriminate zeros? Perhaps there's something you'd like to verbalize, like maybe an ingenious reason why my poem(s) in question warrant your recent zero(s). Or then again, you can just sit there and provide single word statements that are of no constructive value, and far from being delineative in any way, shape, or form. In short, stop being a coward who avoids any sort of bold discourse, you inarticulate cad.
Re: Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer	10-Feb-07/4:06 PM
Just a question concerning the verse, would any one agree that it would be better if I changed it from "so much that I now wish to be very very dead;" to "so much so, that now I wish to be very very dead;" ? Opinions everyone?
Re: a comment on self-suffocation by Phalkon	10-Feb-07/2:41 PM
Or there's also option three: Stay under the bed crying about it till some girl finds you there and offers pity sex. Unfortunately, most likely your mother will arrive in time to comfort you and thwart further possibility of procreation. A pity indeed.
Re: a comment on self-suffocation by Phalkon	10-Feb-07/2:33 PM
Sonny boy, I'd have no problem walking straight up to your face, appalling you with my rather foul breath, to inform you in a violent manner how much of a little shit you are. And then, if you wished to take it further, I'd decisively finish it with swift action, by brutally beating you in the face. You can come down to San Jose if you'd like and prowl the downtown area for me, like a dunce; or you can engage me intellectually on this site by raising the bar of your sad writing abilities and use it to thrash me. Either choice makes little difference to me kid. I don't reside in some cozy dorm, giving voice to pathetic despair like some meek child. My matress is concrete, my bedchamber open to the air, my resolve not in anyway crippled by fear. So, do me a favor, don't make stupid insinuations that you'd punk me if you had me face to face, in a banal comment online. Such things tend to attest to your cowardice, not mine.