Re: a comment on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	10-Feb-07/2:14 PM
PS- I felt erected when you called me chump. Toodles!
Re: a comment on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	10-Feb-07/2:13 PM
Gotcha. :)
Re: Captured by Dovina	10-Feb-07/1:58 PM
You know, there are men who posses soft hands. And why use the finger when sex toys are readily available AND well designed for their purpose? But anyway, that aside, I like this. Well executed. Blessed with nine.
Re: a comment on Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer	10-Feb-07/1:37 PM
lol.
Re: a days journey by donmiguel1960	9-Feb-07/1:18 PM
I'm groping frantically for a solemn place to escape the foul flatulent winds howling from your asshole. It's better not to try grasping what isn't there, rather than seizing the flatulence wafting through your cranium's stale, hollow, and oxygen-deprived air.
Re: a comment on Sir Magnedrol vs. The Dragon (part 1) by Phalkon	9-Feb-07/1:08 PM
Your efforts, sir, fall on blind eyes, deaf ears, and this young mans collapsed rectum. You had been too kind.
Re: a comment on Sir Magnedrol vs. The Dragon (part 1) by Phalkon	9-Feb-07/1:06 PM
You know, it scares me that you chose not to attempt writing this in the throes of a wild three-some. It may have actually assisted in the creation of something better, something other than this medieval concoction spawned by the winds of your ass. And if this were supposed to be a hypothetical story pitch? I'm guessing you got a poor grade, which is less painful than, say, security giving you a violent boot out of a publisher's office.
Re: a comment on Sir Magnedrol vs. The Dragon (part 1) by Phalkon	9-Feb-07/12:57 PM
In what language? Because it certainly is not the case with English.
Re: a comment on Sir Magnedrol vs. The Dragon (part 1) by Phalkon	9-Feb-07/12:56 PM
I'm shocked that for a moment you even had to consider it and change your mind about Spongebob. Though, ofcourse, it would be fucking hilarious, but I am convinced at this time of Spongebobs vile conspiracy to brainwash en-mass the minds of children, everywhere.
Re: Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer	9-Feb-07/12:50 PM
Er, ehem, could this be considered an improper limerick? I know it doesn't fit the particular rhyme scheme and such.. ah, fuck it, whatever.
Re: self-suffocation by Phalkon	9-Feb-07/12:40 PM
"i tendons tear apart" Eh? What in holy fuck is with the I? Is it a disease? Did you somehow fool yourself into thinking it was necessary, like you convinced yourself that sharing this pimple-lyric to the world was a brilliant undertaking? Allow me to compact this whole thing, though I can not preserve its claim to being a lyric in the process: Silly emotions have flooded my hormone filled head so much that I now wish to be very very dead; but my grip on the .36 is slipping due to my tears, hampering my attempt to fill my cranium with lead-- so instead, I'll wail till blood comes out y'ears in the form of a bad lyric you'll wish y'never read. Not bad eh? In fact, I think I'll post this. Oh, and heres a resounding zero. Do us all a favor, smoke some weed, and find something that inspires better creativity... OK? Or slit your wrists, you know, whatever works.
Re: a comment on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	9-Feb-07/12:23 PM
Really? I think sir, that you are the one who took the bait. Because, in all honesty, the whole debacle is dependant on your volcanic outrage, which you provided wholesale, sir. Isn't it a horrid case of irony? I'd say so. Absolutely infuriating to say the least.
Re: Cupid Missed Two Junkies (slightly clearer, rambling draft) by Ranger	8-Feb-07/3:54 PM
This needs a bit of consideration, and more defined shaping of the scene. While the title presupposes the theme, it as it stands now is a little confusing to me; basically, I'm wondering if you have a pretty good image & mental snapshot of the of this man, posed in that odd bodily articulation assumed just before & during the coveted arrival of deathly-bliss; the opiate rushing of the soul towards oblivion... Or if he just discovered that it was laced with acid and had a sporadic thought, or image, of enhancing the coming madness with the consumtion of an bloody orange. In short, I'd be happy to see this piece recieve some sharper definition. The image and thought this poem grasps for is worth perfecting. Till then, mate, heres a seven.
Re: a comment on Edna's Christmas Farewell by Edna Sweetlove	5-Feb-07/1:34 PM
Shithead, asshat, are the better terms. More mature, less manure, fuckwad.
Re: a comment on Brethren, oblivion is not the road to the city Ataraxis II by SupremeDreamer	4-Feb-07/2:08 PM
Main Entry: 4plane Function: noun Etymology: Latin planum, from neuter of planus level Date: 1571 1 a: a surface in which if any two points are chosen a straight line joining them lies wholly in that surface b: a flat or level surface 2: a level of existence, consciousness, or development <on the intellectual plane> 3 a: one of the main supporting surfaces of an airplane b[by shortening] : airplane Now, 2: a level of existence, consciousness, or development <on the intellectual plane> Is that which we fucking intended. Asshat.
Re: a comment on Brethren, oblivion is not the road to the city Ataraxis II by SupremeDreamer	4-Feb-07/2:04 PM
So fucking what? So you took them out of my damn poem and used the bloody fucking dictionary and constructed a rather silly reply. Here, have a bloody blue comment ribbon. Do you read the Signs in your Mind?
Re: Let's praise great Britannia's golden days of now and then by Edna Sweetlove	3-Feb-07/12:28 PM
So, Edna, who is the anonymous admirer? That's what I'd like to know. And as for sweet, you appear quite bitter, M'lady. Lack of love perhaps? Or an overabundance of self-love? Lack-a-day! Who can say? Still it perplexes me.
Re: Controlled Euthanasia by Dovina	31-Jan-07/9:59 AM
I pressed in the plunger and ran to the john afraid but not sorry it had to be done Ok, say this out loud to yourself. Notice anything? I do. John doesn't ryhme with done. Perhaps Don, but not done. That aside, I bless you with an eight.
Re: Hello Rockmage!! by SupremeDreamer	16-Jan-07/7:09 PM
Zero this bitch. har har har. Savvy?
Re: Edna's Christmas Farewell by Edna Sweetlove	4-Jan-07/10:03 AM
Just shoot yourself already woman.