| Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
12-Jun-03/1:39 AM |
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Strong and powerful reminiscence piece. Excellent
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12-Jun-03/1:41 AM |
Brilliant ! 09
and ininspiring
But what a crap title bet you regret that?
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| Re: A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm |
12-Jun-03/1:43 AM |
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Pretty damn fine pie mam. 7
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| Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
12-Jun-03/1:45 AM |
Where did you see my Father we miss him terribly?
DA, this is hilarious but out of respect I never laughed. 8
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
12-Jun-03/1:46 AM |
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Great idea and well written too.
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| Re: The Drunkest ever by horus8 |
12-Jun-03/1:48 AM |
I drink to die !
Probably the most apt and honest line of drinking I have ever read. Your nuts but I gotta love ya 8
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| Re: Unmasking Wyverns by horus8 |
12-Jun-03/1:50 AM |
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Rich in detail, well written but it just aint my cup cake. Heres a 6 not your fault I licked the wrong parts.
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12-Jun-03/1:52 AM |
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Great until the 3rd part where you lose the plot completely.
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| Re: My girl by simone_girard |
12-Jun-03/2:04 AM |
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Uhhhh Babyhood it sounds like its his weener. On the other hand this is undeserving of its 'worst' poem on p/r so heres a 5 so get the party poppers and cocktail sausages we're having ourselves a PARTY ! ! ! !!
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| Re: Love by simone_girard |
12-Jun-03/2:25 AM |
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12-Jun-03/4:06 AM |
The fantasies of a baked bean dribbling semi psycho sex pest feeling wood in the presence of pretty office girls, I have seen this many a time and gobbed in their coffee.
I like the implied humour in this intended or not its cradle rocks like an balding menopausal man at an Elvis convention. 8
Gotta love you hun !
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| Re: Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
12-Jun-03/5:58 AM |
but still dusking? this makes little sense.
Apart form that its good. 6
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| Re: Touchdown by Mona Lisa |
13-Jun-03/1:32 PM |
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Had to give this a twiceover and its very poignant, very proud and I loved it. 9
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| Re: Claustrophobia by INTRANSIT |
17-Jun-03/8:56 AM |
This could also be titled 'A Relationship' 7
Nice shorts by the way.
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