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20 most recent comments by ==Doylum (141-160) and replies

Re: Charles and Eddie by Nicholas Jones 4-Feb-03/8:18 AM
Would i lie to you baby would i lie to you?
oh yeah
?
Re: Feeling by chicka_babe05 4-Feb-03/8:14 AM
This is great. God i wish i could write like you, but as many will confirm i always end up producing a load of old rubbish.

Just one small suggestion, perhaps you could change the last three words to "I wub wou"
Re: a comment on The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos 4-Feb-03/7:45 AM
stop it with the racyism, and the ruderies. No neeed. Perhaps you could have said

Utter suger. 1. You attempt to shock, but just leave me cold, safe in the knowledge I have discovered yet another dumb flunk.

or

Utter slop. 1. You attempt to shock, but just leave me cold, safe in the knowledge I have discovered yet another dumb twot.

or

Utter tripe. 1. You attempt to shock, but just leave me cold, safe in the knowledge I have discovered yet another dumb waiter.
Re: a comment on Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 4-Feb-03/7:35 AM
Ooooh get her!!!
Re: a comment on Me and My Girl by NinjaPoet 4-Feb-03/7:30 AM
I though you made it up. But you didn't. It exists. Somebody actually went and did it. They spent their time making a site to about poo. You go there and...... rate poo.
Jolly good.
Re: a comment on Cloak Of Love by brokenwing 4-Feb-03/7:24 AM
love IS.

i have known despair; we smile every time we meet. and i always lose.

i no longer lay the blame for my own limitations on love.

we are love. we often forget this.

so, in that respect, we are contained by love because we are no more and no less than it.

Thats why -=Dark_Angel=- so just think on
Besides other topics aren't super and lovely enough to be made into poems, only love is truely poetic!!!!!
Re: Cloak Of Love by brokenwing 4-Feb-03/7:16 AM
she chopped it off?
Just cause you had a quick handshandy?
How awful.
Can i have it for my collection of peni through the ages?
Re: a comment on poemrancour by JakeBike 4-Feb-03/7:12 AM
yeah silly girl, cause zeros done lots of stuff, and if you can't work out who it is then your really silly, so there. I think you should spend all your time trying to work out who writes stuff under different user names, afterall its such a clever concept!!!!!!!!!!JIOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLJIGTIPTopOfTheMorinToYou
Re: 42 by brazen 4-Feb-03/6:13 AM
do you thumb at me sir?
Re: a comment on Excommunication by inch of candle - Jesus wants me for a bum ream. An narrative in so many verses that madam palms readings have been savarlay curtailed by ==Doylum 2-Jan-03/6:12 PM
You didn't even read my words. If you had you would not have thanked jesus. However, since you seem to love even Dirk++@ fancy a bag of chips?
Re: Masculine by temptalia 2-Jan-03/5:43 PM
i love this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
no no no no no no no no no no no no i love it with a passion
10outof1010outof1010outof1010outof1010outof1010outof1010outof1010outof1010outof1010outof10
Re: a comment on Am I Still Here? by Ranger 2-Jan-03/5:41 PM
twats being those who don't like your drafts?

I think i mustn't be a twat because i love you poem.

translucent as a pixie's dream
Re: a comment on Masculine by temptalia 2-Jan-03/5:35 PM
how about chapped lips from being out on the street all night?
Re: a comment on Some Things by Christof 2-Jan-03/5:33 PM
oh my dear handshandy your not the big tongued kitchen freak in disguise are you?
Re: the rapier by <~> 28-Dec-02/7:53 PM
where do all commetns go when they die?
where ae your mention of aids? lightening fast as they all should be
where is your verse about Botte de Nuit?
Re: a comment on Things by Quarton 28-Dec-02/6:10 PM
I think for a assembly line bike company you couldn't go far wrong with Raleigh. They have, incidentally, just moved their operations from Nottingham, to the far east. Bejesus knows where.

all those slanty eyed buggers look the same to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh my good christ!!!!!!!!!!! and also spaek zzzzzzhatsits***((()_(_()((_@@@@@@@:@:@LLL:LL::IHJHK:@~:~@

Also, Quarton don't listen either poet, or nowits. Dash sorry, birthmark, oh no almost blew you. no, no blew your cover.
YOU must read Birthmarks usual recommendations:
Barbara, C:
1976. Tccl Binding, London.
Gaskell, J:
1985. Hodder & Stoughton, London
Jilly C:
2002. Bantam Press, London.

I forget the titles but any search will find the relevant infomation
Re: a comment on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum 28-Dec-02/6:06 PM
oh great. Thanks!. 0010010

Yeah that works much much better.

Care for some afterschool ringsting?
Re: a comment on Oh my gosh what was that? by ==Doylum 28-Dec-02/5:28 PM
Does your wood really have corn and browne bits upon it? Why my dear fellow one could almost surmise that you own an home of sexual. Are you indeed an homeowner?
Re: a comment on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 17-Dec-02/4:05 PM
no we're not all pretentious fucks, unless you most wilfully misuse the word. And no i'm not who i think you are thank my old wrinkly mans bollocks. You claiming to be omnipresent?
Re: a comment on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 17-Dec-02/3:50 PM
i see - take you back. whats that got to do with licking wounds?
ret


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