Re: fear by pitchblackdisaster	19-Aug-02/6:50 AM
i'm only 9. i'm the reincarnation of seamus heany. the pope's going to cannonize me, even though i'm not catholic, for my contriburions to the arts. did i mention that i'm a prof emeritus at the sorbonne? that's why. oh, and one other thing, if you don't want criticism, don't submit your work to this site. i gave you clus; you give me sarcasm. right back at you, babe.
Re: Expeditions by Nicholas Jones	19-Aug-02/6:41 AM
excellent.
Re: Powder Blue by [mojo]	18-Aug-02/12:40 PM
you got yer mojo werkin' here, man.
Re: Arachnid by quantumenterprises	18-Aug-02/11:57 AM
lovely.
Re: Puddle by PawnedTidal	18-Aug-02/8:56 AM
i sense a theme running through your poem, dear. it's not just the lonely man who stains the sheets alone. go someplace else. stop wearing black. bathe in the ocean on a moonlit night. but not in florida, or the sharks will get you, and we'll be deprived of your future oeuvre.
Re: Reno by <{Baba^Yaga}>	18-Aug-02/8:52 AM
what's up with that? i saw your response, and i was surprised, to be honest, because it felt like you went raw when you answered, and then he comes trotting back with the salt and gives you a nice brisk wire-brush rub-down. usually, you don't get so personal. you even apologized to the guy. and now he's yanked everything. true colors a little to glaring here? man, everybody sees who everybody else is between their words. didn't you like what you saw, EW? it was that haiku he wrote about friday night escapism, wasn't it? it was a good poem, i thought. but, as usually the battle verbose was more gripping. don't be askairt, EW. repost.
Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>	18-Aug-02/6:25 AM
ta h. i'm off to paint the room red.
Re: Reno by <{Baba^Yaga}>	18-Aug-02/6:20 AM
7-7-7 for the others, and this one's called reno. coincidence? i think not. you give yourself away with the last, here. did you mean to? and the dangling letters, are you just flaunting it to get the bile a-flowing on the dark side? back to the poem--why not tie them all up at the end? i like neat packages, and you are using more structure with b^y, so why not take it the next step?
Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>	18-Aug-02/6:15 AM
ah. unrequited love. the unattainable. the longing. the despair. the consequences. have you seen that online site with painitng by schizophenics? gud stuff there.
Re: Thornapple the Babyfat by <{Baba^Yaga}>	18-Aug-02/6:07 AM
liked this one. more crisp than the others' writings. but, i guess that's what you were going for with this mask, sybil my dahlingk
Re: sky by youngweirdo	18-Aug-02/6:02 AM
morning B, B^Y, h, whoever you are today. i like B^Y's stuff. it meters bouncily.
Re: ''*Night*'' by youngweirdo	18-Aug-02/5:59 AM
oh, i get it, it's just meant to waste our time. SAY SOMETHING, DAMMIT
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	18-Aug-02/5:58 AM
shouldn't 'sweet' be SWEET?
Re: sky by youngweirdo	18-Aug-02/5:51 AM
you tried harder with this one, but you're still not saying anything.
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	17-Aug-02/10:33 PM
and the crustaceans are going wilde
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	17-Aug-02/10:26 PM
well if the cistercians are cisternian, i suspect they'd wear brown ones.... or maybe a brownish yellow, due to all the vegetables last night?
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	17-Aug-02/10:16 PM
don't you mean cisternian?
Re: Selective Alopecia by Ming T. Merciless	17-Aug-02/10:12 PM
so that's what that tickling sensation was...
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	17-Aug-02/10:02 PM
i'll be happier when the capon's home to roost. put your masterpiece back up, if you like. i laughed my ass off when i saw the title o' this one.
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	17-Aug-02/9:53 PM
touche.