| Re: a comment on A Separation by *Lyrisick* |
23-Sep-02/8:43 PM |
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nope. it confuses rather than pleases, guy
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| Re: a comment on Spanish fLie by flatliner |
23-Sep-02/8:41 PM |
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i usually use google translate. just lazy this time, i guess. thanks for the link. google lacks some langs i often want--like latin. who says it's a dead language? how can it be? it's not, dammit! and now back to your regularly scheduled poemming.
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| Re: a comment on Spanish fLie by flatliner |
23-Sep-02/8:33 PM |
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thank yew nentwined. you have more than me, even if is scarfed up offa some smelly ichthiosite. blech. who baited this hook, anyway?
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| Re: a comment on Spanish fLie by flatliner |
23-Sep-02/3:52 PM |
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anybody wanna post a spoken file for us?
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| Re: Spanish fLie by flatliner |
23-Sep-02/3:41 PM |
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| Re: Universal Musings by blu143 |
23-Sep-02/3:07 PM |
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future past presents itself in feeble mind...try, but not so hard. let it be you instead.
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| Re: untitled by ThreeFourSix |
23-Sep-02/3:05 PM |
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trippity-quick words, like the beginning of it all. when the need is sated, what will there be left but the deed? proceed with caution, but proceed.
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| Re: a comment on Faucet's got a nasty drip. FUCK! Not again! by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
23-Sep-02/12:54 PM |
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hey, if he gets off by talking about war, more power to him baba. a month or two in an opium den, that would slit him up a treat.
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| Re: Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore |
23-Sep-02/12:30 PM |
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you have inspired me. i thank you.
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| Re: yellow afterthoughts by royalflesh |
23-Sep-02/12:27 PM |
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i had a bag full of their broken teeth. i made a magic necklace from them. when the moon is blue, is naked time and dancing is sweetest, and mud is the only covering permittes us. and mariglds. lovely, lovely marigolds.
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| Re: Bitter as Wormwood by vulcan |
23-Sep-02/12:23 PM |
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the connexion between trampled stolen roses and hearts and tombstones intrigues me, but i want more development
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| Re: Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof |
23-Sep-02/12:11 PM |
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i'd like it better if s1 ended 'only a ripple' repeating from the line above--a sort of reinforcement of incredulity. ripples can effect untold change, when time and circumstance align just so
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| Re: Night Photograph by jess33 |
23-Sep-02/11:36 AM |
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sometimes what is captured on film is so much emptier though. and the inherent sadness of that can be...devastating...
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| Re: Pilgrim by timfowler |
23-Sep-02/11:18 AM |
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i walked of my own will through the passages of this poem, smiled at your greying. Not at your weariness, but at your recognition of it, pilgrim.
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| Re: a comment on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
21-Sep-02/10:37 PM |
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no man who sleeps with his back to his lover can be in the top 15 list. unless, of course, he's gay. it's an unwritten law. you are false, sirrah.
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| Re: a comment on quickie by <~> |
20-Sep-02/3:25 PM |
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hiya h. yep. you and me are keeping different hours these days...so, you liked this one, didja? heheheheh...
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| Re: a comment on BoatFuckerPoetandKnowit by bigbigdog |
20-Sep-02/1:20 PM |
need copies, p&k? saved 'em, figuring they might be yanked...
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| Re: a comment on On waiting to pick up my lover on Friday by bigbigdog |
20-Sep-02/1:08 PM |
yes, it does have significantly different meaning, but it is an obvious copy--form and all. that's my beef. at least in the gone with the wind thing, the point of view changed. here, he's changed p&k's little girl into a transvestite/transsexual. it might be valid but it sure as hell ain't right. just my .02.
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| Re: a comment on Tugboats by poetandknowit |
20-Sep-02/12:49 PM |
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once more, pretty please? it was so sage and wise, and you really made my day by posting it...
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| Re: a comment on Tugboats by poetandknowit |
20-Sep-02/12:47 PM |
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write it a couple more time, okay? because we're all really really dumb here, and we didn't get your point yet.
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