| Re: For W. by A. Nomaly |
12-Oct-03/7:31 PM |
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line breaks--why? no werkie, comme ca.
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13-Oct-03/12:10 PM |
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| Re: Not On Your Nelly by Wobble McFly |
13-Oct-03/12:17 PM |
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indeed. what inspired said muck?
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| Re: Ù
صادر ÙÙسطÙÙÙØ© أ٠اÙاØتÙا٠by Wobble McFly |
13-Oct-03/12:18 PM |
"ÙجÙاد اÙإسÙاÙ
Ù Ù٠بÙ"????
no way!!!
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15-Oct-03/8:07 AM |
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this is not your sport, 195.157.153.253
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| Re: For M. B. by Tits |
15-Oct-03/8:37 AM |
never figured you for a deleter.
ah, me.
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| Re: Facing Goodbye by Caducus |
15-Oct-03/9:25 AM |
CAD,
nice start.
this is a lovely tribute, but in terms off its poetics, it could use a revamp. the last stanza is definitely the weakest.
good to see you writing again.
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| Re: Pet Hatreds by Bobjim |
15-Oct-03/10:43 AM |
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| Re: Kites, Gunpowder, and a Chair by Geschäftsreise |
15-Oct-03/10:44 AM |
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not to be televised, live.
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| Re: Kites, Gunpowder, and a Chair by Geschäftsreise |
15-Oct-03/10:45 AM |
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| Re: Toku by Bill Z Bub |
21-Oct-03/4:56 PM |
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| Re: glimpses by nentwined |
22-Oct-03/11:56 AM |
nice language, k.
you have managed to paint it without a tick on dr. carawax's list.
bueno.
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22-Oct-03/12:05 PM |
<<Referrer: crystal lane swift>>
nuff said.
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22-Oct-03/10:29 PM |
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22-Oct-03/10:35 PM |
WOW!!!!!11
MEDIOCRITY CODE
31F49081
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| Re: lost love by cherish |
24-Oct-03/6:40 AM |
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| Re: My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit |
24-Oct-03/6:51 PM |
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Behave yourself, Senor Burro!!!!!!!
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24-Oct-03/7:13 PM |
i love monkey love!!!!
but i am screwed down too tight for this poem.
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24-Oct-03/8:27 PM |
much tighter! much nicer.
more painterly, but concisely so.
i especially liked this:
--but her fieldstone wings spread
--yet like wide skirts on gowns
--a hundred years gone.
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| Re: Teaching Beetles To Swim by Bobjim |
28-Oct-03/8:29 AM |
i enjoyed this more than anything i have read here in months. thank you.
only one line interfered with my pleasure:
"That it's them sing (not me),"
i thing should be reanimated to:
It's them that sing, (not me),
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