| Re: Lent Begins by jessicazee |
4-Feb-05/8:31 AM |
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What a lovely world you inhabit.
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| Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin |
9-Feb-05/8:02 AM |
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| Re: Paris 1941-63 by Mister Cakes |
9-Feb-05/9:00 AM |
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| Re: Ceylon Cries by Mona Lisa |
15-Feb-05/5:32 AM |
Your Haiku series on current affairs continues to amaze!
Please do one on Charles and Camilla, my one is rubbish:
ears in a bridal
party, the synod ejects
equine betrothal.
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| Re: The Man I Love by Dovina |
15-Feb-05/5:48 AM |
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A man that would understand what the hell your forever parping on about! For god sake set your sights a little more realistically, try a man who doesn't run away whilst throwing up when you lurch into the room like a floundering minky.
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| Re: Pillow Talk by horus8 |
16-Feb-05/5:37 AM |
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I always feel like I have just had an anal douche and forgot to shut my mouth when I read your poemes. -1-0-
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Feb-05/5:39 AM |
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A trampled on sperm-splat.
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| Re: Hard Month by wlshepherd |
16-Feb-05/5:42 AM |
This is appalling. To think of the rain dog shivering and the some snow cold bird, really evokes massive feelings of having just gargled with Sperm.
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| Re: ~RePOST~Cupid's Arrow <----<< by nothingtoanyone |
16-Feb-05/5:52 AM |
Either I am being jolly dim and don't understand your emittence, giving me the intellgence of a sqeaky parp compared to your large voiding of follow through, or your poem was a colossal waste of time both to write and to read.
On the plus side I really like the use of spacing.
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16-Feb-05/7:09 AM |
The Homo Lord poeme
To make this you will require:
One gay
A computer
Internet access
Appalling adjectives
Turgid imagery
A 0
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22-Feb-05/5:01 AM |
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Is this about the old Yugoslavian dictator? If so, it is really toss, however, if it is about one of the Jackson 5 then it is really toss.
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| Re: Hunger by Dovina |
22-Feb-05/5:03 AM |
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Like a society without peasants, this poem has ideas well above those it achieves. There are too many arisions.
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24-Feb-05/7:52 AM |
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This poem reaches deep into the dark anus of failure and pulls out a plump loaf of such proportions it would embarass Violet Suede.
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| Re: Itâs the Management by Dovina |
28-Feb-05/5:11 AM |
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Do you always go down when your boss tells you to?
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| Re: Background Noise by Plaidypus |
28-Feb-05/5:16 AM |
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A terribly dangerous poeme with grave consequnces for the unwitting reader.
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| Re: Hunger 2 by Dovina |
28-Feb-05/5:25 AM |
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You have finally cracked.
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3-Mar-05/6:31 AM |
Several blind monkeys randomly choosing words from a revolving wheel upon which words had been arbitrarily arrayed would probably blanch if they ever managed to choose such confused dross as "Now watched me dangling as I struggled to breathe". You smelly virgin.
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| Re: My Fair Maiden! by Sashaclese |
3-Mar-05/6:32 AM |
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| Re: We Have Nothing to Talk About by jessicazee |
3-Mar-05/6:35 AM |
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| Re: spiders and butterflies by Mona Lisa |
3-Mar-05/6:36 AM |
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