| Re: Ramblings of a Clerk by Schlinkey |
8-Dec-06/8:44 AM |
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Turgid, dry and ultimately disappointing.
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| Re: Self Portrait by Dovina |
8-Dec-06/8:44 AM |
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Tired, sweaty and rather desperate.
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8-Dec-06/8:45 AM |
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Ecellent, not magnificent use of the wrod "prodding"
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| Re: Instruction by Dovina |
8-Dec-06/8:48 AM |
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Wooly and ultimately a bit of a failure. Shame it semmed infused with the portents of excellence, only to leave one slightly stained.
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| Re: She dreams by amanda_dcosta |
8-Dec-06/8:57 AM |
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Like a big bowl of cornflakes.
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| Re: Fanatic by Dovina |
2-Jan-07/8:35 AM |
Is this about Saddam Hussein?
If so its brilliant.
If not it makes no sense.
Happy New Year, and enjoy the hadj.
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| Re: Edna's Christmas Farewell by Edna Sweetlove |
2-Jan-07/8:36 AM |
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Verily the most whimsical jape of the season.
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4-Jan-07/7:15 AM |
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Tremdously deep, alerting, and faintly distressing.
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4-Jan-07/7:17 AM |
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i'd sooner eat a spoonful of tramp trifle than give this poem a vote of less than eight.
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| Re: Dream Grower by Enkidu |
4-Jan-07/7:28 AM |
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I thought this said "Dream Gower" which could have been about the majestic cover drive of the finest left handed batsman this country has ever produced. However you had to ruin it by not mentioning that at all, and actually having a title which resembles "Dream Gower", instead you seem to have produced a poem which could easily have been written by an eight year old who has been drinking too much pottery glaze.
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| Re: Let Me Entertain You by Bethy |
4-Jan-07/7:38 AM |
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| Re: Sex Object by Dovina |
4-Jan-07/7:49 AM |
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This poem has an overtone of a persecuted jew about it.
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8-Jan-07/3:46 AM |
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A stout yeoman of a poem.
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11-Jan-07/6:21 AM |
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Why do you do that with your poems? it's pretentious and detracts from the words. Oh hang on, having read the words I see why.
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11-Jan-07/6:22 AM |
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11-Jan-07/6:43 AM |
I read a poem by Colin Skilton,
It's fair to say he's no modern Milton,
Sharing more in common with Peter Shilton,
Or Paris Hilton.
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11-Jan-07/6:44 AM |
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| Re: Loneliness by tuthaliash |
12-Jan-07/7:15 AM |
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13-Jan-07/2:33 PM |
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Good to have you back, I suppose there aren't any henges or solstices that want druids at this time of year and the trade in carved plywood mongoose does generally die on its arse after Christmas so you are using your only other method of spreading your hair and posturings through your son's website. Well as I opened so I close nice to have you back.
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| Re: Oh to be a Scot! by Donald McFuck |
13-Jan-07/2:53 PM |
I'm a Scot and I'm a black,
Bought to Scotland in a sack,
I told them all I would'e go back,
To my home in a Iraq,
Even though Scotland is even more cack,
It has something that Iraq does lack,
A bountiful supply of excellent smack.
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