Re: Oh boo by Modulo	11-Mar-03/9:37 PM
Please delte "to no end,". Thank you for flying with us.
Re: Goin? Down Baby by Drummer	11-Mar-03/9:33 PM
Angry young man meets question mark? Watch those apostrophes. They don't play nice when you cut and paste. Please fix. Namaste.
Re: a comment on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig	27-Feb-03/1:46 AM
You are most welcome.
Re: The darkest woods ever by Shardik	26-Feb-03/7:39 PM
Delightful.
Re: LifeArt by bunniesnangels	26-Feb-03/7:38 PM
Fail. Safe. Both.
Re: I'll love you Heather, for ever and ever by TanHand	26-Feb-03/7:24 PM
Scourge.
Re: a comment on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig	26-Feb-03/6:44 PM
As for the poem, I suggest you invert the structure, so: Wooden seahorses drown. Icarus laughs at fallen skylarks As Aeolus sighs.
Re: a comment on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig	26-Feb-03/6:37 PM
Yes, Besooted Fiend, but it Miraculous Healing Dogge Pooe, and with it, I Sight the Sightless, and Erect the Wheel-ed. (You won't be needing that Viagra anymore, Child.) Rise, Son! Cast aside thine round and tumbling Legge-Mockers! Stride! Gambol! Salsa, if you will! (I hear god'swife has a hell of a shimmy). There. That was lovely. I wonder if Lord Ganus has a recipe at the ready for Miraculous Dogge Pooe?
Re: Her bloody diamonds by Bachus	26-Feb-03/5:57 PM
A suggestion: try and ease the connections between the lines. Make the rhythm more natural, easy, as spoken word. This is base carbon, and pressure must be applied; too much, and striations ruin the effect; too little, marcasite. You, sir, are a smooth-tongued devil. I sense it is not beyond your ken to make the needed modifications. I anticipate the boldness of the results. Accept this seven, for now. I assure you there is an eleven in hiding. Your task will be to draw it out.
Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig	26-Feb-03/5:53 PM
Black jelly on your tongue, indeed. Bravo.
Re: a comment on Ode to Chicken Kiev by bunniesnangels	26-Feb-03/5:44 PM
I see you have a fixation with the FAT. Perhaps you might reconsider your menu, before the gout sets in?
Re: a comment on THE POEMRANKER SEXCHART VERSION 1.2 FINAL by TanHand	26-Feb-03/5:42 PM
I can take care of that foryou, sugarhips, and no one need know. Unless, of course, you'd like the whole experiment videotaped, and posted on line. I asuure you that you would find my anatomy most delightfully interesting. Call me.
Re: Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig	25-Feb-03/3:07 PM
Ah, Pig. I would like the chance to tweak this for you, but it needs a night in my unconscious. I shall sleep with it under my pillow, and, if you'll permit me, offer some words on the morrow.
Re: a comment on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig	25-Feb-03/3:06 PM
Because you are a font, and oracle, a connection to their lost, balanced divinity; you are a seductress and a nurturer and they would have to lay down their arms to lie in your arms. Their desire for you weakens and maddens them. The young ones see it and tease; the older ones are deliberately ogres to frighten and dominate through this fearful casting.
Re: a comment on We by Nanshe	25-Feb-03/7:21 AM
I will try this again, in sestina. I think it need more flesh, less sinewy twist. Thank you for the honesty of thine eyen.
Re: a comment on THE POEMRANKER SEXCHART VERSION 1.2 FINAL by TanHand	24-Feb-03/9:38 PM
Apparently, I am late to the orgy as well. But I have brought oysters and pomegranates.
Re: rhyming letter by bxjay170	24-Feb-03/9:34 PM
Forget the pass--tell her, and spare us.
Re: Ode to necrophilia by Bobjim	24-Feb-03/9:34 PM
Wouldn't that lead to coprophilia?
Re: a comment on We by Nanshe	24-Feb-03/9:29 PM
say it aloud; 'tis a pun
Re: a comment on He put a price on her head by Nanshe	24-Feb-03/5:14 PM
Many thanks, honollabre suhl.