on Oh boo by Modulo
11 Mar 2003, 9:37 PM
Please delte "to no end,". Thank you for flying with us.
on Goin? Down Baby by Drummer
11 Mar 2003, 9:33 PM
Angry young man meets question mark? Watch those apostrophes. They don't play nice when you cut and paste. Please fix. Namaste.
replying on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig
27 Feb 2003, 1:46 AM
You are most welcome.
on The darkest woods ever by Shardik
26 Feb 2003, 7:39 PM
Delightful.
on LifeArt by bunniesnangels
26 Feb 2003, 7:38 PM
Fail. Safe. Both.
on I'll love you Heather, for ever and ever by TanHand
26 Feb 2003, 7:24 PM
Scourge.
replying on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig
26 Feb 2003, 6:44 PM
As for the poem, I suggest you invert the structure, so:
Wooden seahorses drown.
Icarus laughs at fallen skylarks
As Aeolus sighs.
Wooden seahorses drown.
Icarus laughs at fallen skylarks
As Aeolus sighs.
replying on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig
26 Feb 2003, 6:37 PM
Yes, Besooted Fiend, but it Miraculous Healing Dogge Pooe, and with it, I Sight the Sightless, and Erect the Wheel-ed. (You won't be needing that Viagra anymore, Child.) Rise, Son! Cast aside thine round and tumbling Legge-Mockers! Stride! Gambol! Salsa, if you will! (I hear god'swife has a hell of a shimmy).
There. That was lovely.
I wonder if Lord Ganus has a recipe at the ready for Miraculous Dogge Pooe?
There. That was lovely.
I wonder if Lord Ganus has a recipe at the ready for Miraculous Dogge Pooe?
on Her bloody diamonds by Bachus
26 Feb 2003, 5:57 PM
A suggestion:
try and ease the connections between the lines. Make the rhythm more natural, easy, as spoken word. This is base carbon, and pressure must be applied; too much, and striations ruin the effect; too little, marcasite. You, sir, are a smooth-tongued devil. I sense it is not beyond your ken to make the needed modifications. I anticipate the boldness of the results. Accept this seven, for now. I assure you there is an eleven in hiding. Your task will be to draw it out.
try and ease the connections between the lines. Make the rhythm more natural, easy, as spoken word. This is base carbon, and pressure must be applied; too much, and striations ruin the effect; too little, marcasite. You, sir, are a smooth-tongued devil. I sense it is not beyond your ken to make the needed modifications. I anticipate the boldness of the results. Accept this seven, for now. I assure you there is an eleven in hiding. Your task will be to draw it out.
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
26 Feb 2003, 5:53 PM
Black jelly on your tongue, indeed. Bravo.
replying on Ode to Chicken Kiev by bunniesnangels
26 Feb 2003, 5:44 PM
I see you have a fixation with the FAT. Perhaps you might reconsider your menu, before the gout sets in?
replying on THE POEMRANKER SEXCHART VERSION 1.2 FINAL by TanHand
26 Feb 2003, 5:42 PM
I can take care of that foryou, sugarhips, and no one need know. Unless, of course, you'd like the whole experiment videotaped, and posted on line. I asuure you that you would find my anatomy most delightfully interesting. Call me.
on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig
25 Feb 2003, 3:07 PM
Ah, Pig. I would like the chance to tweak this for you, but it needs a night in my unconscious. I shall sleep with it under my pillow, and, if you'll permit me, offer some words on the morrow.
replying on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig
25 Feb 2003, 3:06 PM
Because you are a font, and oracle, a connection to their lost, balanced divinity; you are a seductress and a nurturer and they would have to lay down their arms to lie in your arms. Their desire for you weakens and maddens them. The young ones see it and tease; the older ones are deliberately ogres to frighten and dominate through this fearful casting.
replying on THE POEMRANKER SEXCHART VERSION 1.2 FINAL by TanHand
24 Feb 2003, 9:38 PM
Apparently, I am late to the orgy as well. But I have brought oysters and pomegranates.
on rhyming letter by bxjay170
24 Feb 2003, 9:34 PM
Forget the pass--tell her, and spare us.
on Ode to necrophilia by Bobjim
24 Feb 2003, 9:34 PM
Wouldn't that lead to coprophilia?
replying on He put a price on her head by Nanshe
24 Feb 2003, 5:14 PM
Many thanks, honollabre suhl.