on The Errant Knight by Thyme
27 Jun 2003, 1:11 AM
YAY! an 8.
on Paranoia & the thinnest curtain by Jeremi B. Handrinos
31 Aug 2003, 2:01 AM
I don't even know where to start with the praise so I won't. Lots of good stuff in there though.
on Dictionary Magic Test Results (DMTR) by DreamerSupreme
9 Jul 2003, 1:48 AM
That's fun. If you don't mind I'd like to see you play with this and see what comes for my name.
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2003, 8:41 PM
Any one else feel like they're a prisoner?
I'd rather be 31614. That was Carl Panzram's number.
I'd rather be 31614. That was Carl Panzram's number.
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2003, 8:07 PM
You forgot me. Now I must kill myself. Not that you'll take notice. Have a nice life. :'(
on The Zen of the Pen by DreamerSupreme
6 Jul 2003, 2:54 PM
"What good is a pen, if one knows not how to write?"
I've used pens for a lot of things other than writing.
Whistles to weapons the possiblities never end.
I've used pens for a lot of things other than writing.
Whistles to weapons the possiblities never end.
on 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
6 Jul 2003, 2:48 PM
I like this the best out of the series. Keep going by all means.
on some deleted poem
5 Jul 2003, 11:58 PM
It's almost like you don't get that shock humor has no humor without the shock value. You and others like you have burnt out the shock of such things so much that even when I'm fearing my up coming test for HIV your AIDS comments don't even phase me. Why don't you give a break and let us resensitize and then you can come in and be the glorious god of shock humor you imagine yourself to be.
on Creating A Bitch by Kitch
28 Jun 2003, 2:30 PM
Nothing you want me to hear I can say.
I don't get that line. Maybe something like:
What you want to hear isn't what I have to say
The last half of the 3rd stanza seems a little muddled too.
I don't get that line. Maybe something like:
What you want to hear isn't what I have to say
The last half of the 3rd stanza seems a little muddled too.
on -=Dark_Angel_Is_No_Longer_Funny=- by wEdible Underpantsw
26 Jun 2003, 6:08 PM
I never found him to be funny. Chalk it up to creative differences
on On Someone's Dick by JoyLuck
26 Jun 2003, 11:30 PM
I think the l;ast line could use a hor at the end. You messed up the curve of his balls.
on Canada Blows by teenpoetryshoulddie
26 Jun 2003, 1:10 AM
Who exactly do you think this would piss off? The Canucks? They already hate Yanks and looking at the poem would assume that you are one. Besides you blame all their problems on the Frogs. They do that anyway, and you're helping them. The their in the that part of the poem could easily mean the French Canadians' flag. I repeat, they don't like the Frogs. So I ask again, who are you pissing off?
Who ever gave the 3 votes with too much generosity.
Who ever gave the 3 votes with too much generosity.
on A pinch from the snuff box by Jeremi B. Handrinos
20 Jun 2003, 1:33 AM
I look like I literally pissed myself. I actually was drinking water and when I laughed it went all over me. None the less, you owe me a change of pants. 8
on some deleted poem
20 Jun 2003, 1:45 AM
Let me guess....... You're also an athiest, you dress in all black, your suburban high school life was ruined years ago when your mom bought you the wrong shoes, and you have 12.8 piercings?
Damn I forgot. Athiest was trendy 10 years ago. Now you're a wiccan.
Damn I forgot. Athiest was trendy 10 years ago. Now you're a wiccan.
on Father's day in Toledo by Shardik
20 Jun 2003, 1:41 AM
Yeah. Fuckin kids. Why would they buy themselves a lawnmower on his day? I mean yeah it makes it easier on them since every one knows the point of kids is manual labour, but this is Fathers' Day not I'm A Little Shit Day. That's what the Christians call Christmas. Fuck holidays in general. You want a day off? Fuck you. Ask for it. Don't tell me you need it off cause some carpenter was killed by wood and nails a few thousand years ago and today is his birthday. And you! You're not ever Christian. You're a fucking Baptist.
on The irony of the dark continent by zzinnia66
20 Jun 2003, 1:53 AM
No profound comment. Just an 8. Look at it though. Like a heart with no sharp corner, it softly says "I love you."
on some deleted poem
27 Jul 2003, 11:23 AM
I want to be tricked :/
Well done.
Well done.
on some deleted poem
23 Jun 2003, 11:56 AM
I might be a homosexual but that was gay.
on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
15 Nov 2003, 1:44 PM
Oh man that was a fun read. The poem itself was only a 6 but the comments earned a ten. "freaky stalker zero dropper" had me laughing so much it hurt.
rockmage had me fooled. I was under the impression that he cared not for the afairs of humans and that only poems of rocks and trees could catch his eye.
rockmage had me fooled. I was under the impression that he cared not for the afairs of humans and that only poems of rocks and trees could catch his eye.