Re: A pinch from the snuff box by Jeremi B. Handrinos	20-Jun-03/1:33 AM
I look like I literally pissed myself. I actually was drinking water and when I laughed it went all over me. None the less, you owe me a change of pants. 8
Re: Father's day in Toledo by Shardik	20-Jun-03/1:41 AM
Yeah. Fuckin kids. Why would they buy themselves a lawnmower on his day? I mean yeah it makes it easier on them since every one knows the point of kids is manual labour, but this is Fathers' Day not I'm A Little Shit Day. That's what the Christians call Christmas. Fuck holidays in general. You want a day off? Fuck you. Ask for it. Don't tell me you need it off cause some carpenter was killed by wood and nails a few thousand years ago and today is his birthday. And you! You're not ever Christian. You're a fucking Baptist.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jun-03/1:45 AM
Let me guess....... You're also an athiest, you dress in all black, your suburban high school life was ruined years ago when your mom bought you the wrong shoes, and you have 12.8 piercings? Damn I forgot. Athiest was trendy 10 years ago. Now you're a wiccan.
Re: The irony of the dark continent by zzinnia66	20-Jun-03/1:53 AM
No profound comment. Just an 8. Look at it though. Like a heart with no sharp corner, it softly says "I love you."
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jun-03/11:56 AM
I might be a homosexual but that was gay.
Re: Canada Blows by teenpoetryshoulddie	26-Jun-03/1:10 AM
Who exactly do you think this would piss off? The Canucks? They already hate Yanks and looking at the poem would assume that you are one. Besides you blame all their problems on the Frogs. They do that anyway, and you're helping them. The their in the that part of the poem could easily mean the French Canadians' flag. I repeat, they don't like the Frogs. So I ask again, who are you pissing off? Who ever gave the 3 votes with too much generosity.
Re: -=Dark_Angel_Is_No_Longer_Funny=- by wEdible Underpantsw	26-Jun-03/6:08 PM
I never found him to be funny. Chalk it up to creative differences
Re: On Someone's Dick by JoyLuck	26-Jun-03/11:30 PM
I think the l;ast line could use a hor at the end. You messed up the curve of his balls.
Re: The Errant Knight by Thyme	27-Jun-03/1:11 AM
YAY! an 8.
Re: Creating A Bitch by Kitch	28-Jun-03/2:30 PM
Nothing you want me to hear I can say. I don't get that line. Maybe something like: What you want to hear isn't what I have to say The last half of the 3rd stanza seems a little muddled too.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Jul-03/11:58 PM
It's almost like you don't get that shock humor has no humor without the shock value. You and others like you have burnt out the shock of such things so much that even when I'm fearing my up coming test for HIV your AIDS comments don't even phase me. Why don't you give a break and let us resensitize and then you can come in and be the glorious god of shock humor you imagine yourself to be.
Re: 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	6-Jul-03/2:48 PM
I like this the best out of the series. Keep going by all means.
Re: The Zen of the Pen by DreamerSupreme	6-Jul-03/2:54 PM
"What good is a pen, if one knows not how to write?" I've used pens for a lot of things other than writing. Whistles to weapons the possiblities never end.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jul-03/8:07 PM
You forgot me. Now I must kill myself. Not that you'll take notice. Have a nice life. :'(
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jul-03/8:41 PM
Any one else feel like they're a prisoner? I'd rather be 31614. That was Carl Panzram's number.
Re: Dictionary Magic Test Results (DMTR) by DreamerSupreme	9-Jul-03/1:48 AM
That's fun. If you don't mind I'd like to see you play with this and see what comes for my name.
Re: The Beach by leviathan	9-Jul-03/11:46 AM
Wow... I'm too wrapped up in it to say anything. I'll come back later and give a better comment. For now, a 9. (This with my rule about not giving 10's although you tempted me here.)
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Jul-03/11:23 AM
I want to be tricked :/ Well done.
Re: Paranoia & the thinnest curtain by Jeremi B. Handrinos	31-Aug-03/2:01 AM
I don't even know where to start with the praise so I won't. Lots of good stuff in there though.
Re: Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>	15-Nov-03/1:44 PM
Oh man that was a fun read. The poem itself was only a 6 but the comments earned a ten. "freaky stalker zero dropper" had me laughing so much it hurt. rockmage had me fooled. I was under the impression that he cared not for the afairs of humans and that only poems of rocks and trees could catch his eye.