Re: Our Sweet Lady Lispalot by lunar	5-Apr-03/10:42 AM
isnt this kinda like that thing we did in year 5 or 6? about the woman and the mirror and lancealot and all? Oh well this was quite comical and all but nto your best, the best ones where your tortured love poems, id sa resently you have gone down hill, but thats the way life goes
Re: His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger	5-Apr-03/10:38 AM
YOU TRY TO HARD, your poems are full of intricacys they dont need, they are frankly souless as well there is no fire no passion. basically that describes all your poems, so thats 10 for effort, 0 for soul and 4 for over all so a total of 3 out of 10
Re: a comment on Fate by Dostoyevsky	5-Apr-03/10:33 AM
its about fate its self the images are of fate its all inter-connected, GOD you people so obcessed with intricate things that you cant take it for face value
Re: W.A.R. by lunar	3-Apr-03/5:26 AM
FIRSTLY the mudvanye fellow is a stalker, SECONDLY the poem isnt as good as some of your others and THIRD you people talk of morality but its only mere opinion, there is no galatic right or wrong justs whats funny, and i think its funny the war with iraq. After all the amount of international laws broken by the maericans will land them in shit, firstly they themselfves have peraded iraq POW's on TV breaking the geneva convention, the US government has sactioned use of cheamical weapons on iraqi soliders (in contrevention of the UN cheamical weapons treaties) and finally the invaded a country with the aim of reshime change (TWICE!!) and that goes against international law, so its gonna be hilarious when they have to go to court of this (BUSH IS A WAR CRIMINAL!!!)
Re: Senses by lunar	14-Feb-03/11:49 AM
reminds me of a song which has the line 'im alive i think its time to live', by lifehouse, its great song called trying, and well ike your great poety, well done kat another masterpeice
Re: a comment on Past by Dostoyevsky	8-Feb-03/3:21 PM
I cnat answer those questions cause the situation in real life is not resolved, but thankyou verym uch for your comment, i think they are really good points and i will take them into consideration, i need ot get closer ot my subject to understnad her more, oh and im the peasant, this is my odd attempt at a love poem, hehhehhe i need help
Re: a comment on Past by Dostoyevsky	8-Feb-03/3:19 PM
yes but why? i want CONSTRUCTIVe critisism not DESTRUCTIVE critisicm richard. I also want ot learn how to spell but thats another days work
Re: a comment on Past by Dostoyevsky	7-Feb-03/1:56 PM
thank you
Re: a comment on Past by Dostoyevsky	7-Feb-03/1:54 PM
please explain, i would like to make it better
Re: Senses by lunar	2-Feb-03/3:10 PM
but you write of love, and you love Tien so does that make you a hipporite? life isnt a game its a very cruel joke
Re: Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar	2-Feb-03/3:09 PM
talk more of love i like that better. although an 8 for this
Re: Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	27-Jan-03/11:32 AM
fool
Re: Spring Rolls by Ranger	27-Jan-03/11:27 AM
average, sorry i just dont feel anytihng from this
Re: Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar	13-Jan-03/2:21 PM
ok this one does deserve a 10, i like it but i dont know why!
Re: me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar	13-Jan-03/1:58 PM
very deep and oddly like lessons, kinda mad, but good thoguh until is still my favourite ill give you 7
Re: The poemranker desk by lunar	13-Jan-03/1:57 PM
i like it cause its different, its really interesting though, the way that it has the random nature, i like that about it, a bit too conceptual for me
Re: The Birds by lunar	12-Jan-03/2:40 PM
sorry just read the rest of your poems and i think they are slightly better than this so i will have to reduce my vote to 8
Re: Xmas gifts list by lunar	12-Jan-03/2:39 PM
beautiful
Re: Until by lunar	12-Jan-03/2:38 PM
i like this one alot i reallly really like this one, im not just being nice, this one is really good, an easy 9
Re: The Birds by lunar	12-Jan-03/2:29 PM
very sad, those poor birds! very good poem, although slightly disturbing ill give it a 9, not a 10 as nothing deserves a 10